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Tuesday, 6 August 2013

Where am I?-By Eden

As lightning appears in front of the big round shiny moon looking down at us, as the captain drives the ship pushing through the smoky fog they see a beautiful young girl stuck under a long thick brown branch. She saw the ship, she was worried.

The girl is 14 years old, her name is Sarah. Sarah loves her family and animals, she comes from the palace as well..

As the pirates grabbed the young girl and wrapped a piece of fabric around her mouth. They drove away after 20 minutes the moon started to make a weird sound. But then suddenly the moon disappeared. The pirates were wondering whats happening.But then they heard a crack, it was a ship and as soon as they knew it the ship disappeared. The pirates didn't know what to do except for the captain, he was swimming and swimming as the young girl held on to his foot.

After 250 k of swimming they reached a shore. They were lying on the sand saying "were alive" then they stood up and looked around, they took three steps to see if there were any traps. Then they started to walk and look around, they found old bodies and heaps of gold coins. They turned around and said "WHERE AM I?"

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