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Wednesday 14 August 2013

How To Save The King - Liam

"I can see it we're nearly there Alex!." Said Joseph smiling ."I can see the knight , he's just crossing over that abandoned creaky old bridge."
"Wait you think he can see us."Said Alex,
" no but however he might spot us sooner or later" , 
"okay miasmal take a photo so we know what he looks like if we see him again.

After two long years , a couple of mountain climbers have finally figured out , after all there

research ,where that stupid knight is off too. They have been stalking him and now they can get him for what he's going to do........

They have caught up to him somewhere in the dreaded snowy winter land , with huge spike top mountains and steep valleys , known as the Himalayas . They last saw him on the verge of getting to the kings castle on top of a mountain called K2. The strange knight would like to gracefully assainn
ate the king in his sleep for no apparent reason. 

"Thats why we want to stop him". 

As Joseph and Alex ( the mountain climbers ) , approach the third highest mountain in the world known as Hamburger , they can see the knight entering the castle , but first he had to get past the two huge guards. 

"Wait there are no guards."
But while he was speaking, Joseph saw two big mushy thing rolling down the glass ear 
"We should run It's only a few kilometers." Said Alex 
"okay lets go then."

Halfway to the castle Alex could hear a banging noise he looked down the glaser and he tripped! Joseph screamed for help , but no one was around , but he carried on anyway knowing the king would die if he didn't.


He eventually got to the castle and saw the knight holding the king hostage , so you know what he did. He yelled die! And throw his ski goggles at him , and the knight conveniently he got knocked out . Joseph was so surprised he started jumping up and down for joy , but he was still sad about Alex .There where three thing he could do ; Look for Alex , keep talking to him self , or think of more ideas of what he should do , but instead he had tea with the king.



2 comments:

  1. I liked how you described the setting of every area that came about.

    By Blake

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  2. Your descriptions made the scenery come alive and the action was awesome. I also liked that you used complex words.

    By Mum

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