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Thursday 15 August 2013

Persuasive writing- wast land-by Eden

waste land


Many schools use there spear spaces for something useful like;playgrounds for little people,some were year 7 &8 can hang out and lodes more.That is why I beleave year  7&8 should have some where we can hang out rather than leveing it as a wast.


Firstly,we should have it for leaning so if it is a nice day we could get permission from our teacher a take your pen and book and write out there.Or even hang out with our friends. As well could have an umbrella.

Secondly,when we go out for lunch little kids gets in our way which is so anowing.anther reason is when we hopfuly get it,it will be only year 7&8 which would be awsome.

Finally, we never ever use that for anything,all it dose in winter is get muddy and we get dirty"YACH".

So now have I persuaded you to for the year 7&8 should have there own little space.

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