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Monday, 5 August 2013

Save me- Kaitlyn

Jack was on his way to save the girl of his dreams.

Jack could see the castle behind him. The fog surrounded everything. He could see the castle and the rocks around it but nothing else.

Jack is a rugged young village boy that lived with his foster parents all Jack did in his cottage was look after the animals and do every single thing for his foster parents. He has brown hair, blue and green eyes and a smile that is hard to resist. Jack never thought a day like this would come.

Jack was on an old bridge that was tied to the rocks in front and behind him. If  Jack fails to get across the bridge on his mighty steed he would plunge to his death. Jack had to get across the bridge because if he didn't he wouldn't get to save Princess for Sophia from the dark knights. It was January the 15th this is the day when the dark knights take a royal light (good) princess and turn her dark (bad).

Jack was under pressure to get over this bridge. Slowly, carefully and surely he stumbled across the bridge. The path leading to the castle was only steeps away when "ahhh" the bridge tipped to the right and  Jacks mighty steed fell to the rocks underneath the bridge. Jack managed to hold on to the bridge slowly pulling himself up onto the rocks that the bridge was originally tied on to. Without a horse Jack had to travel by foot!!

 2 DAYS LATER:

Jack had made it to the castle he got out his knife and sword ready to take down who ever got in his way. Jack attacked the guards out side of the dark castle then he started looking for a way into the castle. He  climbed up the castle rock walls to see if there was  way up there. He climbed up slowly took the guard out who was in front of a open door (on the roof). All you heard was the screams of the guards getting stabbed in the chest. Jack crept into the door and found the dungeon, "help cried a voice coming from way down the corridor". He sneaked down the hallway and found Sophia locked up in chains. When Jack finally got Princess Sophia out he grabbed her by her arm and took her back up to the open door. Then heaps of guards and soldiers  came running and riding on there horses from the other side of the rooftop. The dark king came first then the others.

Jack grabs his sword and stabs the dark king right in the heart. Jack grabs the Kings steed and tells Sophia to hoop on, Sophia in her wonderful gown jumps onto the horse with Jack. The only way to get off this rooftop was to jump off onto the ground below. Jack and Sophia  successfully escapes from the dark castle.

 

                                       Jack gets his girl and they live happily ever after.   

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