This is a learning blog for the year 7 and year 8 students in Room 11 at Reremoana school. The writing on this blog is written us, we are the students. We edit our writing as best we can. Please have an uderstanding of our development in writing. We are looking forward to your positive feedback of our writing. - Students of Room 11
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Monday, 19 August 2013
Persuasive Writing - WasteLand, It's Pointless! - By April
WasteLand, It's Pointless
Can you imagine if our school had a year 7&8 space where only them and their classmates could sit and; chat, do work, play games or even just sit there and eat? I strongly beleive that Reremoana school should have an area that only year 7&8 could sit and not be interrupted by little kids, have our own learning space and not have a pointless wasteland.
The grass there is pointless. Kids get dirty during winter when it is really muddy and their parents will go insane when their child/children gets home. Its also a waste of space. How many times have you seen kids playing on it?
Also it gives the year 7&8s their own privacy without little kids screaming and yelling around when they eat. Us year 7&8s do our learning inside with a loud environment but if we get a space outside our classroom we can just go outside in the nice fresh air and do our learning in peace and quite.
The year 7&8s could use this space to be social with each other and play games. In the courtyard, the year 7&8s can't talk through a whole conversation without little kids butting in and interrupting us. If we had our own space we could talk without little kids butting in and screaming.
In conclusion I believe that our school should have a space where only year 7&8s could talk and play games without any interruptions because we are trustworthy.
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