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Monday 19 August 2013

Persuasive Writing - WasteLand, It's Pointless! - By April

WasteLand, It's Pointless

Can you imagine if our school had a year 7&8 space where only them and their classmates could sit and; chat, do work, play games or even just sit there and eat? I strongly beleive that Reremoana school should have an area that only year 7&8 could sit and not be interrupted by little kids, have our own learning space and not have a pointless wasteland.


The grass there is pointless. Kids get dirty during winter when it is really muddy and their parents will go insane when their child/children gets home. Its also a waste of space. How many times have you seen kids playing on it?

 Also it gives the year 7&8s their own privacy without little kids screaming and yelling around when they eat. Us year 7&8s do our learning inside with a loud environment but if we get a space outside our classroom we can just go outside in the nice fresh air and do our learning in peace and quite.

 The year 7&8s could use this space to be social with each other and play games. In the courtyard, the year 7&8s can't talk through a whole conversation without little kids butting in and interrupting us. If we had our own space we could talk without little kids butting in and screaming.

In conclusion I believe that our school should have a space where only year 7&8s could talk and play games without any interruptions because we are trustworthy.

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