Persuasive Writing- Shayle

                                   Tables outside our class
Do you see everyone all together eating on the floor, with little kids running around like disturbed ants, don't you just want an extension to our classrooms? Somewhere were the year 7/8s can just hang out?, Well I do, I truly believe that we should have tables there, I am going to persuade you my point of view.

Firstly~ We should have tables outside our classrooms because no.1, aren't you just tired of sitting on the ground, its uncomfortable and putting your food there that is just yuck! I think that the year 7/8s should have a spot to sit and enjoy their lunch together. No.2, it can be an extra extension to our classrooms, we could play chess, read a book, play ping pong and many more reasons! And no.3, at lunch time we can finish our work. It can even be used for technology, blogging and then that muddy wasteland will be gone! There is definitely no point in having just boring old grass there!

Secondly~ It would be a huge benefit to us, and such a great fun area, and plus there will be a cover or an umbrella, so on sunny summer days, if you forgot you hat, you and your friends could go sit their, talk, read, play chess, or whatever! I think it would be and excellent idea!

Thirdly~ When the year 7/8s come running through that mud in winter and bringing it into class, or having to go rinse all the mud off in that icy cold tap water! Horrible, no! We don't want that do we! And anyway there will surely be more space for the little kids to go sit down, eat and play in the courtyard. Its also a quick way when you need the bathroom, they are right there! Or if you want to go put your bag away its close as well, so we can just put our lunch boxes away and go play!

To conclude~ Lets all say Bye Bye wasteland and hello tables, That is why I strongly believe it is an excellent idea, so lets hope to see them soon!

By~ Shayle