In the year of 2013, There were two mall cops. There names were Kyle and Rhys. They loved there jobs because they are aloud to use there firearms at any time of the day. Both of them had a good childhood. They both were smart-ish but they loved to learn without been told to. They stayed out of trouble and it payed off. They got into a good high school and passed there. Last year, they both applied for a mall cop job and they were chosen and started 10 mouths ago.
It was a normal day, 5 people arrested, 2 people tazer to the bone and Sam, yes Sam. Sam is one of those people were he would do EVERYTHING to get money. "HEY" shouts Rhys. "PUT YO' HANDS ON DA' GROUND" shouts Kyle. "Nah BRO" shouts Sam. KA BOOM!, Sam shoots Rhys in the eye. "OMG" shouts and random guy. "Oh" says Kyle. "ITS TIME FOR TAZER POWER!" shouts Kyle. Kyle try's to call to S.W.A.T team to come to the seen. He calls them and within 5 mins, they are their, at the mall. Sam try's to book it out of the mall. Somehow, he brakes into a car with his bear hands. A ton of police are racing down the freeway. A cop lays spicks to sam's tires to make them flat and it works! Sam has no way to get out of this but get out of his car and run into the bush. For a little while, he got away but help is here! The cop dogs can get him!, I think? Sam is not a fast runner. Within 5mins, The cop dogs get him. Sam is at a dead end. He does not give up yet.
Sam jumps into a river knowing that he can not swim. Trying his hardest, he floats down stream. He is coming down to the beach, were it meets up. The cops are waiting for him. Sniper ready! "Yes Sir!"
THE END
HA! you thought that it was over. How about YOU make the ending?
What side are you on?
Sams or the cops?
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Tuesday, 14 May 2013
Narrative Writing- The Best Day Ever?
School, school and more school. Seven days a week and a lot in a year. School is of those things that kids HATE!, but if your Blake, Liam or Mattew it the best thing that ever happen to you!
Reremoana School, very old school and looks VERY old to. Cobwebs, moldy walls and cracked roofs makes the school a pigs house. The school does not have the money to make this problems fly away thanks to the kids that make it a pigs house. The school has some smart kids but there not learning new things because 95% of the kid don't know what 2+6 is. The one thing that the is REALLY god at is minecraft! Almost every kid is a boss at it, even the smart kids!
Its a normal day at school, kids are still dumb and the smart kids are not learning new things. Its was 11.35 and 15 seconds on the clock when we are all called the hall (or what I like to call it, the Junk Yard). We where all told that the school was closing down because of who knows what. Almost every kid in the hall (or what I like to call it, the Junk Yard) was the happiest they could be! I took a glance at the smart kids and I think they where not happy about about it, I think they where about to rage! There was no hope for them, or was there?
Its the day after the head of the school told us that the school was closing down. The next thing I know is all the smart kids (or what I like to call, the "Geeks") walking into the school like a boss. They had toy guns and camo gear ready for war. Me, Sam, Rhys and Daivd thought "well, we will give you a war all right!" The goal is to that we have to go to the principle and tell her that the school has to be closed because its unsafe to work in. Its a race to her to get the final say on the school. My team gets there first........ but then I realize something?
School is one of those things where we kind of have to do. If we don't go to school, where kind of done. "Ok, have the school, keep it open" I say.
Reremoana School, very old school and looks VERY old to. Cobwebs, moldy walls and cracked roofs makes the school a pigs house. The school does not have the money to make this problems fly away thanks to the kids that make it a pigs house. The school has some smart kids but there not learning new things because 95% of the kid don't know what 2+6 is. The one thing that the is REALLY god at is minecraft! Almost every kid is a boss at it, even the smart kids!
Its a normal day at school, kids are still dumb and the smart kids are not learning new things. Its was 11.35 and 15 seconds on the clock when we are all called the hall (or what I like to call it, the Junk Yard). We where all told that the school was closing down because of who knows what. Almost every kid in the hall (or what I like to call it, the Junk Yard) was the happiest they could be! I took a glance at the smart kids and I think they where not happy about about it, I think they where about to rage! There was no hope for them, or was there?
Its the day after the head of the school told us that the school was closing down. The next thing I know is all the smart kids (or what I like to call, the "Geeks") walking into the school like a boss. They had toy guns and camo gear ready for war. Me, Sam, Rhys and Daivd thought "well, we will give you a war all right!" The goal is to that we have to go to the principle and tell her that the school has to be closed because its unsafe to work in. Its a race to her to get the final say on the school. My team gets there first........ but then I realize something?
School is one of those things where we kind of have to do. If we don't go to school, where kind of done. "Ok, have the school, keep it open" I say.
Monday, 8 April 2013
Kyle's writing- School sleepover
It was the end of term 4 and some of the year 8 made up a school sleepover. Little did they know, that this school sleepover was going to wild! Reremoana school, it a school (if you did not know) nice people and hard learns. The school was made on a old graveyard but the people that ran it died. The school was aloud to make a new school. The school was a little spoke at times. 2 year ago, a boy called Tom was found DEAD in his classroom. Know one knows why.
Everyone started to come to the school hall and got ready for the night. Then trouble came!, Davey waked into the room."Shot!""the school sleepover is done!" Everyone hates Davey, Why you say? He the school bully! Beats up little kid and takes people lunch money. He a strong,tall and let fat!, Yes he is fat. But because he is fat docent mean that you should pick a fight with him!
Its 9:00pm now. Everything is going well. One of the people at the sleepover know that there are 2 people missing. Both of them are 9 years old. Everyone is trying to find them. Then the news that no one wanted to hear, the 2 of them have beed found DEAD outside room 11. At that time of night, things were go to get bad!
3 more hours have passed. It closing in on 12:00 at night. Everyone to looking at the clock as it hits 12:00 then AHAHAHA!!!! aA girl screams in pain! HELP HELP ME, IM GOING TO DIE she screams! Everyone go looking for her. A girl gets a bad welcome looking at the dead girl. Everyone is called out on the roll. 4 more are missing. 4 missing and 3 dead, what now?
Out of the blue, someone is talking on the loudspeaker. "there is no one here" a boy says. Now at this stage of the night. People say that a ghost will appear between 2 and 3:00 in the morning. Well guess what, a ghost has the loudspeaker i its ghostly hand and says" I am here for you, I am here to kill you. We can do this the easy way or the hard way. The easy way is that I drown you all, or the hard way is that is stab you, hold you down, bern your face with acid and then shot you. Which one?" and well everyone screamed for there life! The ghost kills 15 more people.
Theres no one that can help us. No one know that we are dyeing by this really, really non-cool ghost. Whats going to happen?
Everyone started to come to the school hall and got ready for the night. Then trouble came!, Davey waked into the room."Shot!""the school sleepover is done!" Everyone hates Davey, Why you say? He the school bully! Beats up little kid and takes people lunch money. He a strong,tall and let fat!, Yes he is fat. But because he is fat docent mean that you should pick a fight with him!
Its 9:00pm now. Everything is going well. One of the people at the sleepover know that there are 2 people missing. Both of them are 9 years old. Everyone is trying to find them. Then the news that no one wanted to hear, the 2 of them have beed found DEAD outside room 11. At that time of night, things were go to get bad!
3 more hours have passed. It closing in on 12:00 at night. Everyone to looking at the clock as it hits 12:00 then AHAHAHA!!!! aA girl screams in pain! HELP HELP ME, IM GOING TO DIE she screams! Everyone go looking for her. A girl gets a bad welcome looking at the dead girl. Everyone is called out on the roll. 4 more are missing. 4 missing and 3 dead, what now?
Out of the blue, someone is talking on the loudspeaker. "there is no one here" a boy says. Now at this stage of the night. People say that a ghost will appear between 2 and 3:00 in the morning. Well guess what, a ghost has the loudspeaker i its ghostly hand and says" I am here for you, I am here to kill you. We can do this the easy way or the hard way. The easy way is that I drown you all, or the hard way is that is stab you, hold you down, bern your face with acid and then shot you. Which one?" and well everyone screamed for there life! The ghost kills 15 more people.
Theres no one that can help us. No one know that we are dyeing by this really, really non-cool ghost. Whats going to happen?
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