Kyle's writing- School sleepover

It was the end of term 4 and some of the year 8 made up a school sleepover. Little did they know, that this school sleepover was going to wild! Reremoana school, it a school (if you did not know) nice people and hard learns. The school was made on a old graveyard but the people that ran it died. The school was aloud to make a new school. The school was a little spoke at times. 2 year ago, a boy called Tom was found DEAD in his classroom. Know one knows why.

Everyone started to come to the school hall and got ready for the night. Then trouble came!, Davey waked into the room."Shot!""the school sleepover is done!" Everyone hates Davey, Why you say? He the school bully! Beats up little kid and takes people lunch money. He a strong,tall and let fat!, Yes he is fat. But because he is fat docent mean that you should pick a fight with him!

Its 9:00pm now. Everything is going well. One of the people at the sleepover know that there are 2 people missing. Both of them are 9 years old. Everyone is trying to find them. Then the news that no one wanted to hear, the 2 of them  have beed found DEAD outside room 11. At that time of night, things were go to get bad!

3 more hours have passed. It closing in on 12:00 at night. Everyone to looking at the clock as it hits 12:00 then AHAHAHA!!!! aA girl screams in pain! HELP HELP ME, IM GOING TO DIE she screams! Everyone go looking for her. A girl gets a bad welcome looking at the dead girl. Everyone is called out on the roll. 4 more are missing. 4 missing and 3 dead, what now?

Out of the blue, someone is talking on the loudspeaker. "there is no one here" a boy says. Now at this stage of the night. People say that a ghost will appear between 2 and 3:00 in the morning. Well guess what, a ghost has the loudspeaker i its ghostly hand and says" I am here for you, I am here to kill you. We can do this the easy way or the hard way. The easy way is that I drown you all, or the hard way is that is stab you, hold you down, bern your face with acid and then shot you. Which one?" and well everyone screamed for there life! The ghost kills 15 more people.

Theres no one that can help us. No one know that we are dyeing by this really, really non-cool ghost. Whats going to happen?