Tuesday 16 April 2013
Reremoana School Cross Country 2013!
Congratulation to all the Room 11 athletes that participated in the anual Reremoana School Cross Country day.
A special Congratulation to all the top three finishers!
1. Gemma - 1st year 7 girls
2. Hannah 2nd year 7 girls
3. Liam 1st year 7 boys
4. Teia 2nd year 7 boys
5. David 3rd year 7 boys
6. Leslie 1st year 8 girls
7. April 2nd year 8 girls
8. Finau 3rd year 8 Girls
9. Rayaan 2nd year 8 boys.
Well done superstars!!!
Tuesday 9 April 2013
Her Little Red Hood
Once apon a time in a magical land there lived a smart and inelegant
young girl.
She had dark long curly hair that swayed as she galloped threw the meadow.
Her light blue eyes sparkled like diamonds , her name was Little Red
One day granny did not feel well so Little Reds mother called her from
the meadow where Little Red was picking flowers.
As Little Red reached the the house her mother
was holding a basket covered by a green and blue tea towel.
As Little red was walking threw the meadow
and into the forest she saw Mr Wolf.
Mr Wolf was a screed and nice fox but after the last accident with granny
he turned from hungry to good. And Little Red and Mr Wolf became friends
anyway.
He saw Little red heading towards Grannies house and tiptoed behind her as they entered.
Granny ,Granny Little Red shouted stepping threw the broken glass
its me Little Red and Mr Wolf i have food for you.
Then there was a big bang out side ??????????????
Little Red Riding Hood-Narrative-Resolution
She pushed her time box then through her eyes she saw what happened. Then she lands back on the floor then rushes into grandmas house then about a minute Mr.2476 came though the door and in surprise he saw Red standing next to her grandma. In a flash Reds R.E.D coat slid down her arm then formed into a MK47 then she went balitza all over the prison jumper then in a quick moment he was dead...
Little Red Riding Hood-Narrative-Climax
Red glides though the trees dodging everything that flies at her while she was doing that. Mr.2476 was already at Reds grandmas door then barges though the door to see Reds grandma lying down in bed then Mr.2476 got out a knife and started to stab the life out of Reds grandma. Red comes up to her grandmas door to see it had come of its hinges to find Reds grandma on the floor with blood all over the floor and Mr.2476 stading next to her.
Red Riding Hood !
I am picking up little flowers far away from our cottage and near the woods. My red dress and cape has got stains on them from climbing the trees. I was told too many times not to go there far away and I was never told why. I loved this part because of how it grows wild flowers and long grass that tickles my feet as I walk. I breathed softly as the air smelled like honey. This part is the only part that grows big wild shady trees and a little pond. I listened as the bees buzzed around from flower to flower.
Little Red Riding Hood-Narrative-Compication
Reds mum finds out that Reds grandma is vey ill. She tells Red to give her this medicine so Red immediately says "YES" and her mum tells her to stay away from dark sky's valley and to go through cliff mountains and Red says "yes." And Red put the medicine in a compartment in her hover board and puts her time box and clips it to her jeans then kisses her um goodbye then with her hover board in her hand then leaps out of the window and clips the board to her shoes and sets off to grandmas house. Then Red forgets about mums advice and meets Mr.2476 then he asks her where she is going and Red says "to my grandmas house" then Mr.2476 asks if they should race then Red says yes but Mr.2476 knew a short cut to grandmas house.
Little Red Riding Hood-Narrative-Orientation Setting
A long time ago in a galaxy far far away there is a vast growing city. In a time where hover board races took place in huge stadiums, flying cars and time travel is invented, great people everywhere and one of them is Little Red Riding Hood. Known for her R.E.D Hood and her other loves are her M7 hover board and her Time box and her grandma. But there was a recant Prison jumper Mr.2476.
Past midnight-Narrative Writing
It was the summer of 2010. I still have nightmares about that night, I remember the dark halls and the classrooms with the darkest corners and those screams those high pitched horrible screams the ones that sounded so close yet so far away. It was the night of the school sleepover it was a clear grey night the stars twinkled in the night sky, the crickets sang in the cold night breeze that crawled up your spin and gave you the creeps. Even though its been this long I know I'm next........
Hi I'm Gabriel I'm the school clown everyone laughs at my jokes I have a joke for every occasion. I love a good joke making people laugh and a good movie. But I hate people who don't know how to have fun, chores, and a bad joke.I have a secret that not even my parents know about but I only got it from that night, but some day I will have to tell someone some day because if I don't It will be to late.
But I'm getting ahead of myself it was february 12th 2010 we where getting ready for the year 7 & 8 sleepover, everyone was exited about the night of games sleeping away from home and being with friends but for me that was a different story I was getting everything I could get into my little bag but most of the space was taken up by my jokes kit. After round 3 with my bag it finally zipped up just in time I zoomed out the door to catch up with my best friend that I will always remember "Brandon" I yelled "wait up" I try to put my bag on my shoulders I just manage to put one strap on my shoulder "what's in their bricks" "no" I replied. So we walked to school and had an ordinary day then after school everyone left except for the year 7 & 8 students, Mr.Edward and Mrs.Watson stayed. We set up our sleeping bags in two places one for the girls and one for the boys. The boys had the old damaged hall while the girls had the luxury teachers lounge. Then we had dinner and went our separate ways at 1:15am I had to go to the toilet and we had to go in threes so I woke up Brandon and DJ to come with me so they did while I was in he loo I heard them both scream when I came out they were not there but then some thing horrible slid into my brain and in a flash I memory was in front of my eyes It was When Mr.Edward told us that the school was built on a grave yard suddenly goose bumps slid into every part of my body then Amy2 had to go to the toilet so she took Jenny and Germ then when she came out to find that they were missing so she ran to Mrs.Watson to tell her about the bad news and that they where missing........
I was scared to fall asleep so I went to get drink then something dripped onto my head, I looked up to see Brandon dangling from a wire blood dripping slowly from the bottom of his corpse, then I let out a loud scream and ran into something that had a yellow jacket and it seemed to move quicker then quick it seemed to move gracefully while it seemed to not touch the ground then in a flash it flew away reviling another corpse was behind the creature it was Jenny. She seemed to still be alive yet dead as she was lying in a pool of blood. I ran to her then she said something to me that is my secret "The beast is not from the school its from Mr.Edward." Then she past away so I got the courage to barge into Mr.Edwards part of the hall to see him doing something ghastly, something horrible, something gruesome something I will never forget..............................
Hi I'm Gabriel I'm the school clown everyone laughs at my jokes I have a joke for every occasion. I love a good joke making people laugh and a good movie. But I hate people who don't know how to have fun, chores, and a bad joke.I have a secret that not even my parents know about but I only got it from that night, but some day I will have to tell someone some day because if I don't It will be to late.
But I'm getting ahead of myself it was february 12th 2010 we where getting ready for the year 7 & 8 sleepover, everyone was exited about the night of games sleeping away from home and being with friends but for me that was a different story I was getting everything I could get into my little bag but most of the space was taken up by my jokes kit. After round 3 with my bag it finally zipped up just in time I zoomed out the door to catch up with my best friend that I will always remember "Brandon" I yelled "wait up" I try to put my bag on my shoulders I just manage to put one strap on my shoulder "what's in their bricks" "no" I replied. So we walked to school and had an ordinary day then after school everyone left except for the year 7 & 8 students, Mr.Edward and Mrs.Watson stayed. We set up our sleeping bags in two places one for the girls and one for the boys. The boys had the old damaged hall while the girls had the luxury teachers lounge. Then we had dinner and went our separate ways at 1:15am I had to go to the toilet and we had to go in threes so I woke up Brandon and DJ to come with me so they did while I was in he loo I heard them both scream when I came out they were not there but then some thing horrible slid into my brain and in a flash I memory was in front of my eyes It was When Mr.Edward told us that the school was built on a grave yard suddenly goose bumps slid into every part of my body then Amy2 had to go to the toilet so she took Jenny and Germ then when she came out to find that they were missing so she ran to Mrs.Watson to tell her about the bad news and that they where missing........
I was scared to fall asleep so I went to get drink then something dripped onto my head, I looked up to see Brandon dangling from a wire blood dripping slowly from the bottom of his corpse, then I let out a loud scream and ran into something that had a yellow jacket and it seemed to move quicker then quick it seemed to move gracefully while it seemed to not touch the ground then in a flash it flew away reviling another corpse was behind the creature it was Jenny. She seemed to still be alive yet dead as she was lying in a pool of blood. I ran to her then she said something to me that is my secret "The beast is not from the school its from Mr.Edward." Then she past away so I got the courage to barge into Mr.Edwards part of the hall to see him doing something ghastly, something horrible, something gruesome something I will never forget..............................
Monday 8 April 2013
Hidden in the Roots
It is night time in the Reremoana school hall. Everybody is enjoying themselves by talking and relaxing. Its starts to get really dark and dry. Jenny is a young 12 year old girl with light brown eyes and dark blonde hair. Jenny is really nice also smart. She can be really helpful when it comes to not so good situations.
This is a year 7/8 sleepover on the Reremoana school fields and is getting really foggy all of a sudden. Surrounding sounds of mysterious noises are filling the hall while we eat dinner. 4 people decide to go and check what it is or wherever its coming from. 2 people spot mysterious flying creatures just outside the toilets but no one knows where they ended up after they walked directly in their direction. The other 2 managed to escape.
2 bodies have been found lying in the middle of the road, but the other 2 have gone missing and we cannot find them. No one knows that the school is built on an ancient graveyard until Mr Fourie reports. Mr Munro tells everybody to assemble back to the hall immediately. 4 people did not listen to Mr Munro's instructions and are now missing.
It is just past midnight and Davey and Gem hear a mysterious scream coming from the toilets. Jenny goes out to check whats there but she spots a zombie now zombies are surrounding her and she has no where to go.
2 more bodies were found on the floor. After a while they all got sent to sleep safely but don't forget the zombies.
This is a year 7/8 sleepover on the Reremoana school fields and is getting really foggy all of a sudden. Surrounding sounds of mysterious noises are filling the hall while we eat dinner. 4 people decide to go and check what it is or wherever its coming from. 2 people spot mysterious flying creatures just outside the toilets but no one knows where they ended up after they walked directly in their direction. The other 2 managed to escape.
2 bodies have been found lying in the middle of the road, but the other 2 have gone missing and we cannot find them. No one knows that the school is built on an ancient graveyard until Mr Fourie reports. Mr Munro tells everybody to assemble back to the hall immediately. 4 people did not listen to Mr Munro's instructions and are now missing.
It is just past midnight and Davey and Gem hear a mysterious scream coming from the toilets. Jenny goes out to check whats there but she spots a zombie now zombies are surrounding her and she has no where to go.
2 more bodies were found on the floor. After a while they all got sent to sleep safely but don't forget the zombies.
ONCE IN A PICTURE
One misty night at reremoana school in the summer of 2013. It was unusually quiet that There were no birds chirping, no wind blowing. The only sound that we could hear was the taps dripping.
Davey was a tall strong 13 year old. He is the toughest kid in the school and no one gets in his way. He has blonde hair and one blue eye. On his other eye he has a big scare that covers his eye. He is scared for life.
That night all year 7/8 students were camping in the hall. Two students Jenny and Davey were researching the schools history and found out that Reremoana school was built on an old grave yard that was built in the 18th century. At that moment they were told to finish up with what they were doing they noticed a figure in the picture. It was to hard to make out the face . They were told to turn it off straight away by they're principle or it would be taken off them. About 5 minutes later there was a scream and a splash. Everyone woke up. We were counted and we found out that principle brown was missing. Mr Blake went to investigate and found april and ben cut open on the floor.
At twelve at night we heard a dripping sound and then the lights flickered the fire alarm went one and off and then everybody wakes up. We hear a scream and again we count how many people are here. Jenny is missing.
We were about to leave the school when the doors wouldn't open. The lights turned off and on and principle Brown was there but he wasn't the same his eyes were red and he had A KNIFE IN HIS HAND. They flickered on and off rapidly. You could see the principle moving closer and closer untill we heard a knife slice through some ones body but who's??? The lights came back on and Davey holding the principles head in his hand.
The next day the school was secure and the bodies were returned to their families except Jenny she was not found.........
Davey was a tall strong 13 year old. He is the toughest kid in the school and no one gets in his way. He has blonde hair and one blue eye. On his other eye he has a big scare that covers his eye. He is scared for life.
That night all year 7/8 students were camping in the hall. Two students Jenny and Davey were researching the schools history and found out that Reremoana school was built on an old grave yard that was built in the 18th century. At that moment they were told to finish up with what they were doing they noticed a figure in the picture. It was to hard to make out the face . They were told to turn it off straight away by they're principle or it would be taken off them. About 5 minutes later there was a scream and a splash. Everyone woke up. We were counted and we found out that principle brown was missing. Mr Blake went to investigate and found april and ben cut open on the floor.
At twelve at night we heard a dripping sound and then the lights flickered the fire alarm went one and off and then everybody wakes up. We hear a scream and again we count how many people are here. Jenny is missing.
We were about to leave the school when the doors wouldn't open. The lights turned off and on and principle Brown was there but he wasn't the same his eyes were red and he had A KNIFE IN HIS HAND. They flickered on and off rapidly. You could see the principle moving closer and closer untill we heard a knife slice through some ones body but who's??? The lights came back on and Davey holding the principles head in his hand.
The next day the school was secure and the bodies were returned to their families except Jenny she was not found.........
Midnight at Reremoana
It's 7:30 Friday 13th at Reremoana. The day we all know about the movie with Freddy Krueger. Shivers are running down all our our spines. Today it is camping in the hall. Our school has been here for at least 100 years now. The commotion in the hall is so loud I can;t even hear myself think. Davey has been acting strange. As I fix up all my sleeping bag I hear odd, scary spooky noises. I go to the toilet and hear a scream in the courtyard. I finish my number 1 first then tell mr Fourie. Everyone is is playing and having fun except for Davey he isn't so much. The teachers get suspicious and worry.
The principle had a school count. The result of the count showed that Germ and Jenny from room 14 were missing. There were teachers searching up down and all around for them. Davey was bullying kids in the bathroom and stealing their money to buy butter chicken wraps at the canteen. I was reading my Skullduggery Pleasant book and I was getting stuck into it. Everyone was messing around in the hall. i stumble across a poster as I walk to the bathroom and try to stick up for my buddy who was getting bullied. I threaten Davey that I will tell on him if he doesn't stop. But as I say that I hear multiple grunts echoing in the hall. Screams everywhere. Davey ran out of the bathroom. I panicked so I followed him he looks behind him and he screams "what are you doing" but I'm too tired to reply. We run into a bush and notice legs out of the bush we pull them out and we recognise them Germ and Jenny with no brains " Could this be a zombie invasion"?
Ding midnight hits the grandfather clock. We shiver "Oh no" Davey says. "What" I say " the ancient dead bodies will rise from the dead" I basically knew everything about as I play Black ops 2 but this was real. "Its not long before the zombies smell the warmth of our blood, we got to ..." he didnt finish "We got to what". All we know is that we are the only ones alive except for Mr Fourie. " Smash Jenny and Germ then wear their flesh" he says. "what thew hell"? He reassures me and I can trust him. We both get two wooden stakes and stab them really hard while we wipe blood from our faces. We put on their girly clothes and stumble across the soccer field with zombie flesh oozing all over us. Zombies sniff us everywhere "Ahhhhh" I scream Davey bit me. I realise he is a zombie. I die.
The principle had a school count. The result of the count showed that Germ and Jenny from room 14 were missing. There were teachers searching up down and all around for them. Davey was bullying kids in the bathroom and stealing their money to buy butter chicken wraps at the canteen. I was reading my Skullduggery Pleasant book and I was getting stuck into it. Everyone was messing around in the hall. i stumble across a poster as I walk to the bathroom and try to stick up for my buddy who was getting bullied. I threaten Davey that I will tell on him if he doesn't stop. But as I say that I hear multiple grunts echoing in the hall. Screams everywhere. Davey ran out of the bathroom. I panicked so I followed him he looks behind him and he screams "what are you doing" but I'm too tired to reply. We run into a bush and notice legs out of the bush we pull them out and we recognise them Germ and Jenny with no brains " Could this be a zombie invasion"?
Ding midnight hits the grandfather clock. We shiver "Oh no" Davey says. "What" I say " the ancient dead bodies will rise from the dead" I basically knew everything about as I play Black ops 2 but this was real. "Its not long before the zombies smell the warmth of our blood, we got to ..." he didnt finish "We got to what". All we know is that we are the only ones alive except for Mr Fourie. " Smash Jenny and Germ then wear their flesh" he says. "what thew hell"? He reassures me and I can trust him. We both get two wooden stakes and stab them really hard while we wipe blood from our faces. We put on their girly clothes and stumble across the soccer field with zombie flesh oozing all over us. Zombies sniff us everywhere "Ahhhhh" I scream Davey bit me. I realise he is a zombie. I die.
The mirror
Blood leaked from the mirror and dripped on the ground as it vibrated from the screams outside. Suddenly the door locked and the lights went out with a crack. Silence filled the air. No one said a word. The only sound were the drips from the blood leaking from the mirror. Davey, Jenny, Kick, Billy, Andrew and the Germ ( Davey's brother ) huddled together. They were a group of kids who liked to dare each other but now they trapped in a toilet, alone. All because Andrew dared them all at midnight to go into the toilets."Thanks a lot Andrew, now we're trapped." Shouted Jenny. "well i didn't know it was haunted!" Replied Andrew. "shut up!" Screamed Billy. "Just be quiet for once!" Suddenly the lights started to flicker on and off. A moaning sound broke the silence and a women appeared in the mirror. Her face was half ripped off and both her arms were missing. "run!" Suddenly they all sprinted through the door and out into an old abandoned farm.
In the middle was a broken down house surrounded by sheep. In the front was a graveyard which smelt like the undead. 1 meter long scratch marks tore through the door and the windows. Smoke puffed from the chimney and their was a weird feeling in the air. Like there was a sprit hanging around.. The group slowly walked towards the house before stopping at the front door. Davey slowly pushed the door open to reveal a huge living room."o.k, lets split up..."
Kick was walking down a long corridor. When he stopped with fear in his eyes. A small doll lay at the end of the corridor, in its hand was a human eye. He walked up to it with caution. After a while he picked it up carefully."Be my friend."His mouth dropped with terror."Lets be friends forever." Suddenly he dropped the doll on the ground and sprinted away. "Don't leave me, friends don't run away." Kick kept running but when he turned the corner the doll was right in front of him."Lets be friends forever." The noise dug deep into his mind."Lets be friends forever, forever, forever..."
Billy and Andrew were downstairs at the back door."Billy, i dare you to go outside and touch the big gravestone and then come back.."Said Andrew shoving him out the door. "Pick up that rock so i know you went." Then he slammed the door and left billy on his own.Suddenly a loud scream came from outside. Andrew swung open the to reveal Billy hanging by a piece of rope.His neck was bleeding and his eyes were missing. Then Andrew pulled a pistol from his pocket and walked outside. It wasn't long before he found a little girl standing by a tombstone saying. 'Here lies mary dongrass. Died 1894 1905.' Andrew was speechless , all he could say was nothing. All of a sudden the girls started to bleed. "Who are you? Go away."Shouted Andrew. He held the gun to her head and pulled the trigger. Her head exploded into a shower of blood yet her body was still standing. Slowly her hand hand raised up and grabbed hold of his gun. immediately an army of maggots swarmed out the stump where her head was and climbed up his arm. He dropped the ground in agony and with his dying breath he took one last shot at the girl before she sank into the ground where she belonged.
Davey, Jenny and the germ were now checking out the basement.It was filled with spider and cockroaches all trying to get a piece of food. There was writing on the walls made with blood and a small furriest in the corner with a fresh skull in it. Suddenly a moaning sound broke silence. Foot steps came from the stairs and the door creaked open. Nothing. "I have a gun, come out you baby!" Shouted Davey.'Bang!''Bang!''Bang!'..."why can i hear breathing behind me?"Said germ. he carefully pulled out his pistol and span around to see a tall man in a tuxedo. His face was pale white and was flat as paper. It was slender. Instantly the lights flickered off and the race was on for the front door. Quickly Davey started shooting around. Suddenly he hit a box of Chinese fireworks. A ball of flame ignited from the box causing the entire basement to explode. Just as the house blasted into flames they jumped out the door. A huge Mushroom rose from the debris. covering the sky with smoke."Its the end." Moaned Jenny looking at her arm that had been scorched by the fire. "Thank god." They climbed to their feet and walked off into the wilderness wondering how to get home...
Past Midnight At School
One summer night at a cold, dark grey place there was a school named Reremoana Primary School. The year 7&8 students had a sleepover.
One of the student was Davy. Davy was the tallest, strongest and toughest bully in the whole of Manurewa. He had dark short blonde hair and blue eyes like the sun set and a giant scar across his face which he got from fighting with his dad.
The sleepover was on the soccer field and everyone was in a tent. The tents have 4 people sleeping in each one. There's only one scary thing about the school it's that it was built on an old graveyard with more than 150 dead bodies underneath.
It was half past twelve when Davy felt something grab him then pull him out and rip him open. The creature also grabbed Jenny from the tent and she yelped so loud that everyone woke up and ran to her tent. They saw Jenny and Davy lying on the ground with blood flowing out of there hearts and all the children assemble to the hall and take no notice that 4 people where missing.
Then they heard another scream from the after school care room. They all stare in horror when they saw the shadow of the creature walking past the halls back doors then at the last door it stops and faces the children then BAM!
The creature falls to the ground then the police officers come and grab the creature and send it to the scientist. They found out that it was Helen clarks zombie.The zombie came alive and murdered the scientist and ran back to the school and went back to its grave and called out to all the zombies in New Zealand to never come out again unless there is a big emergency and that they can quickly run back to their graves and forget about everything.
By April Tamepo
Kyle's writing- School sleepover
It was the end of term 4 and some of the year 8 made up a school sleepover. Little did they know, that this school sleepover was going to wild! Reremoana school, it a school (if you did not know) nice people and hard learns. The school was made on a old graveyard but the people that ran it died. The school was aloud to make a new school. The school was a little spoke at times. 2 year ago, a boy called Tom was found DEAD in his classroom. Know one knows why.
Everyone started to come to the school hall and got ready for the night. Then trouble came!, Davey waked into the room."Shot!""the school sleepover is done!" Everyone hates Davey, Why you say? He the school bully! Beats up little kid and takes people lunch money. He a strong,tall and let fat!, Yes he is fat. But because he is fat docent mean that you should pick a fight with him!
Its 9:00pm now. Everything is going well. One of the people at the sleepover know that there are 2 people missing. Both of them are 9 years old. Everyone is trying to find them. Then the news that no one wanted to hear, the 2 of them have beed found DEAD outside room 11. At that time of night, things were go to get bad!
3 more hours have passed. It closing in on 12:00 at night. Everyone to looking at the clock as it hits 12:00 then AHAHAHA!!!! aA girl screams in pain! HELP HELP ME, IM GOING TO DIE she screams! Everyone go looking for her. A girl gets a bad welcome looking at the dead girl. Everyone is called out on the roll. 4 more are missing. 4 missing and 3 dead, what now?
Out of the blue, someone is talking on the loudspeaker. "there is no one here" a boy says. Now at this stage of the night. People say that a ghost will appear between 2 and 3:00 in the morning. Well guess what, a ghost has the loudspeaker i its ghostly hand and says" I am here for you, I am here to kill you. We can do this the easy way or the hard way. The easy way is that I drown you all, or the hard way is that is stab you, hold you down, bern your face with acid and then shot you. Which one?" and well everyone screamed for there life! The ghost kills 15 more people.
Theres no one that can help us. No one know that we are dyeing by this really, really non-cool ghost. Whats going to happen?
Everyone started to come to the school hall and got ready for the night. Then trouble came!, Davey waked into the room."Shot!""the school sleepover is done!" Everyone hates Davey, Why you say? He the school bully! Beats up little kid and takes people lunch money. He a strong,tall and let fat!, Yes he is fat. But because he is fat docent mean that you should pick a fight with him!
Its 9:00pm now. Everything is going well. One of the people at the sleepover know that there are 2 people missing. Both of them are 9 years old. Everyone is trying to find them. Then the news that no one wanted to hear, the 2 of them have beed found DEAD outside room 11. At that time of night, things were go to get bad!
3 more hours have passed. It closing in on 12:00 at night. Everyone to looking at the clock as it hits 12:00 then AHAHAHA!!!! aA girl screams in pain! HELP HELP ME, IM GOING TO DIE she screams! Everyone go looking for her. A girl gets a bad welcome looking at the dead girl. Everyone is called out on the roll. 4 more are missing. 4 missing and 3 dead, what now?
Out of the blue, someone is talking on the loudspeaker. "there is no one here" a boy says. Now at this stage of the night. People say that a ghost will appear between 2 and 3:00 in the morning. Well guess what, a ghost has the loudspeaker i its ghostly hand and says" I am here for you, I am here to kill you. We can do this the easy way or the hard way. The easy way is that I drown you all, or the hard way is that is stab you, hold you down, bern your face with acid and then shot you. Which one?" and well everyone screamed for there life! The ghost kills 15 more people.
Theres no one that can help us. No one know that we are dyeing by this really, really non-cool ghost. Whats going to happen?
Past midnight at school
It was the summer of 2013, the stars sparkling in the sky with strange noises in the Trees. There was no clouds and it was grey and stuffy. I didn't want to go to the class sleepover because it was a dark and spooky night at reremoana school. With the New Zealand flag waving in the wind where on top of the flag pole stood a proud black bird.
There was a boy named davey joans he was the school bully and he came to our class sleepover. he is a tall strong boy with blond slik hair and blue eyes. He also has a big scar running across his face. But no one has ever asked him how he got his scar for years. Because 2 years ago a boy from china who just came to new Zealand asked him how he got his scar. So davey told him the story and everyone was ease dropping in on the conversation. And when davey had finished they all started to giggle and laugh. And the they all said together "A bunny did this to you" And he got so angry that he started pounding the little china boy. He ended up in hospital the next day with a bad injury to his head and kidney, and thats how he became the school bully. But the good thing was that his dad picked him up so he didn't come to our class sleepover.
When the rest of the 7&8 got there we headed over to the fields to set up the tents that where sleeping in.When Rayaan and Nicholas where setting up their tent because they where late everyone was reading in their own tent. Then we heard a scream from outside the tent. When we got out of our tents Rayaan and Nicholas gone. We all started looking high and low for them, but we couldn't find them. We asked the teacher why we couldn't find them. And he said the school was built on an old graveyard he told a long story about the graveyard.
While he was telling the story a student found two bodies one dead and the other one paralyzed. They looked so different to Nicholas and Rayaan. So we buried the dead one and carried the other one back to the field. And about 5 minutes later the paralyzed body came to life but he was dazed and confused and he couldn't remember how he had gotten there. We told him that two of our class mates had gone missing to try help him remember but we were even unsure if it was one of our missing students. Because he didn't look like either Rayaan or Nicholas. But in the end he remembered and told us that his name was rayaan.
Moments later after midnight we heard another scream. So we assembled in the hall for a roll call but two students were missing. So the same student who found the other bodies looked in the same place and found two more bodies. So the teacher told us to stay together at all times.
When we went back to our tents I saw a head in the bush. So I told the teacher what I and he told everyone to follow him and then he opened a secret compartment filled with guns and spears. But there was one special gun that I got. And then went to find what was in the bushes. We hid behind the bush where we saw the head and peeked over only to see an army of terminators.
So we tried to throw rocks at them and spears at them and shoot them with guns but it kept standing and didn't go down. All that happened was it just hit them and the metal just grew back over the bullet. So everyone just gaped except me I stayed and said "you are all terminated" and shot them with my spacial gun.
There was a boy named davey joans he was the school bully and he came to our class sleepover. he is a tall strong boy with blond slik hair and blue eyes. He also has a big scar running across his face. But no one has ever asked him how he got his scar for years. Because 2 years ago a boy from china who just came to new Zealand asked him how he got his scar. So davey told him the story and everyone was ease dropping in on the conversation. And when davey had finished they all started to giggle and laugh. And the they all said together "A bunny did this to you" And he got so angry that he started pounding the little china boy. He ended up in hospital the next day with a bad injury to his head and kidney, and thats how he became the school bully. But the good thing was that his dad picked him up so he didn't come to our class sleepover.
When the rest of the 7&8 got there we headed over to the fields to set up the tents that where sleeping in.When Rayaan and Nicholas where setting up their tent because they where late everyone was reading in their own tent. Then we heard a scream from outside the tent. When we got out of our tents Rayaan and Nicholas gone. We all started looking high and low for them, but we couldn't find them. We asked the teacher why we couldn't find them. And he said the school was built on an old graveyard he told a long story about the graveyard.
While he was telling the story a student found two bodies one dead and the other one paralyzed. They looked so different to Nicholas and Rayaan. So we buried the dead one and carried the other one back to the field. And about 5 minutes later the paralyzed body came to life but he was dazed and confused and he couldn't remember how he had gotten there. We told him that two of our class mates had gone missing to try help him remember but we were even unsure if it was one of our missing students. Because he didn't look like either Rayaan or Nicholas. But in the end he remembered and told us that his name was rayaan.
Moments later after midnight we heard another scream. So we assembled in the hall for a roll call but two students were missing. So the same student who found the other bodies looked in the same place and found two more bodies. So the teacher told us to stay together at all times.
When we went back to our tents I saw a head in the bush. So I told the teacher what I and he told everyone to follow him and then he opened a secret compartment filled with guns and spears. But there was one special gun that I got. And then went to find what was in the bushes. We hid behind the bush where we saw the head and peeked over only to see an army of terminators.
So we tried to throw rocks at them and spears at them and shoot them with guns but it kept standing and didn't go down. All that happened was it just hit them and the metal just grew back over the bullet. So everyone just gaped except me I stayed and said "you are all terminated" and shot them with my spacial gun.
Past midnight at School!!!
It was a dry summer night with a hot wind blowing thorough.
It was getting dark and it was very hot and sticky.
The school felt Empty and abandoned not even a single bird made a tweet.
Everyone went silent and they thought about the old myth on the grounds underneath
Not knowing if they were true.
As we were getting ready for bed we found that two of the students at school were
missing as everyone was thinking what the heck do I do now next We heard screaming in the distance I started to think
About the old Myth what if this school was really built on a Graveyard.
All the students were assembled in the hall and Two students missing
Just seemed to jump to Four students missing.
At one minute past Midnight we all heard a scream again but this time the scream
Felt a lot closer.
As I came to Realize I suddenly recognized the scream it was Chloe.
The teachers went out to go and see if they could find the four students.
The teachers wet out and found the body of Chloe she was not moving and The skin
On her arm was all ripped and it was dangly.
The teachers found another student with the same thing.
As the teachers went and searched around the school they found Blake and Teia lying on The ground
They gave Teia Resuscitation he woke up but Blake did not wake up he was dead.
Teia told us that these grey people came and dragged him underground if
The teachers came any later he said that he would be dead as-well.
The teachers discovered that the only way for this terror to end was for the sun to come up
But that was Six hours away.
The teachers gathered all of us in the hall making sure that every vent window and door
Was shut and locked.
When we woke up the sun was shining so we went and had a look outside
we found that the grass was Ripped up and there was a huge crack in the ground almost looked
Like there had been an earth-quake.
As we went on the felid we found a note it said that there was a note it said
You were lucky this time but next time we will get our revenge for what you did
From The ZOMBIES.
Past midnight at school
One cold summer morning the morning of year (7&8) room 11 & 14s sleepover. The school bully was really exited probably because he wants to bully people. Davey has bloude hair , blue eyes and a big 3D scar on his face. He is so big and tough that if he touched your head it would pop like a pimple. And the reason he is a bully is because when growing up is big sister bulled him all his life. But that night past midnight at reremoana primary and intermediate school the dark grey spooky sky topped off with a scary mist. All of room 11 and 14 were setting up there tents and then boom we all heard a scream and two bodies they were identified as Teia Francis and Kaitlyn Yakas-Dance. After all that drama all of us had to sleep in the hall . And that morning Mr Fourie and Mr Munro called the Parents of Teia Francis and Kaitlyn Yakas -Dance were told about the horrible tragedy but yet two bodies are still missing but the teachers were wondering if the fact that the school was built on a graveyard had any thing too do with the horrible tragedy but then we found the killer digging its blood thirsty fangs in too hannah mesleys neck when we shone the torch on the vampire it was ... there was a shocking silence its Shayle Bertram right away Mr Fourie ripped out his cel-phone right out of his back pocket and called the ambulance and then Shayle got an injection that turned her back into a human and we all just forgot that horried night . And Teia , Hannah , and Kaitlyn got berryed in the graveyard across the street .
Past Midnight At School
One dark and gloomy summers night the year 7/8 students were camping at Reremoana school.
It was unusually quiet. All you could hear was the rustling of the tree's in the wind.
Suddenly Davey the school bully woke up.
Davey was tough,tall,strong and had blonde hair and blue eyes.
He also had a scar across his face.
He heard the rustling of the grass like someone was walking outside.
There was a loud scream and then a chainsaw sound.
Everybody woke up ran out of their tents and starting running around aimlessly
Later that night everybody assembled in the hall.
When the teacher was talking the lights went out and the projector in the hall came on.
There was a white screen and then a chainsaw sound.
Everybody was scared of what was happening.
Nothing happened for while.
After about 5 minutes the teacher stood up and started calming everybody down.
The lights came on and standing behind the teacher was Hockey Mask Jason.
What happened next was Undescribable.
There was blood everywhere what was happening before their eyes was like chainsaw massacre.
Hockey Mask Jason had just killed their teacher.
Just when Hockey Mask Jason was about to move on to the next victim Davey the school bully stood up to tried too stop him.
But Davey could not stop him alone and Hockey mask Joe Had cut off Davey's head.
Now they were all alone
What could they do too stop this masked murderer...
Past midnight at school
It is summer of 2013.My primary/intermediate school is having a sleep over.My class and room 14 are coming.It is 10pm in the morning.Its dark,grey,dry and spooky.As I walked into one of the school gates all I hear is the dry grass crunching under my feet and the other children that have arrived yelling and screaming in there tents on the rugby field.
One person that I hear as soon as I walk into the school gates is the school bully Davey. I could see his shadow in a tent. Davey is the strong,tough and tall.He has blonde hair blue eyes and a big scar going through his right eye down to his cheek. He is a bully because his mum still has the a whip from when she was a little kid and uses it on him when he does nothing wrong.His dad treats him like a piece of rubbish. So he takes it out on other people because he is to scared to take it out on his parents.
The year 7/8s gathered in the centre of the rugby field so Mr Fourie and Mr Munro could organize people to set up the rest of the tents.Mr Fourie said that the school was built on an old graveyard.Some people got freaked out but the others didn't believe him because he is the type of teacher that like jokes and tells them often.When we spilt to set up the tents and put our stuff in them we heard 2 screams. Mr Munro got everyone to assemble in the centre of the rugby field.Mr Fourie counted everyone and 2 students were missing.
Mr Munro told us to settle down and start to go to sleep. So everyone walked over to there tents.As I got into my bed I felt something beside me I thought it was my friend Jenny sleeping next to me but as I opened my eyes there was my best friend April and germ lining there dead OMG!
I screamed really loud Jenny woke up and Mr munro and Mr Fourie ran to the rescue. They got everyone out of there tents with their stuff and told them to assemble in the hall.When Jenny and I were walking we heard a scream everyone turned around to see where the scream came from. Mr Fourie counted everyone again but no one was missing. When we finally got to the hall Mr Munro counted us and 2 more people were missing. It is 1min after midnight and there was banging on the windows and doors in the hall.
About 10mins after the machines across the road started up and I looked at the clock it was 12.02 and I was really freaked out. Then 2 mins later the machines stopped then as soon as the banging on the hall windows and doors started again.They stopped and we heard another scream. Everyone had a chance to go to sleep because al the noises finally stopped. The next morning everyone woke up and had some breakfast.
We had to pack up before we left. There were scratch marks the tents we had left up all night, and on mine and Jenny's there was a word written on it in blood it said you will be next!!!!!!
One person that I hear as soon as I walk into the school gates is the school bully Davey. I could see his shadow in a tent. Davey is the strong,tough and tall.He has blonde hair blue eyes and a big scar going through his right eye down to his cheek. He is a bully because his mum still has the a whip from when she was a little kid and uses it on him when he does nothing wrong.His dad treats him like a piece of rubbish. So he takes it out on other people because he is to scared to take it out on his parents.
The year 7/8s gathered in the centre of the rugby field so Mr Fourie and Mr Munro could organize people to set up the rest of the tents.Mr Fourie said that the school was built on an old graveyard.Some people got freaked out but the others didn't believe him because he is the type of teacher that like jokes and tells them often.When we spilt to set up the tents and put our stuff in them we heard 2 screams. Mr Munro got everyone to assemble in the centre of the rugby field.Mr Fourie counted everyone and 2 students were missing.
Mr Munro told us to settle down and start to go to sleep. So everyone walked over to there tents.As I got into my bed I felt something beside me I thought it was my friend Jenny sleeping next to me but as I opened my eyes there was my best friend April and germ lining there dead OMG!
I screamed really loud Jenny woke up and Mr munro and Mr Fourie ran to the rescue. They got everyone out of there tents with their stuff and told them to assemble in the hall.When Jenny and I were walking we heard a scream everyone turned around to see where the scream came from. Mr Fourie counted everyone again but no one was missing. When we finally got to the hall Mr Munro counted us and 2 more people were missing. It is 1min after midnight and there was banging on the windows and doors in the hall.
About 10mins after the machines across the road started up and I looked at the clock it was 12.02 and I was really freaked out. Then 2 mins later the machines stopped then as soon as the banging on the hall windows and doors started again.They stopped and we heard another scream. Everyone had a chance to go to sleep because al the noises finally stopped. The next morning everyone woke up and had some breakfast.
We had to pack up before we left. There were scratch marks the tents we had left up all night, and on mine and Jenny's there was a word written on it in blood it said you will be next!!!!!!
Thursday 4 April 2013
Past midnight at school!
I just arrived at school with my lagguage.It is a summer morning and everyones really excited about the year 7s and 8s sleepover at school. Cars come and go dropping kids off and leaving dusty smoke behind.I continued walking as sunlight burns my face."Summer, I muttered".Everyone is heading to their own classroom, boys in room 11 and girls in room 14 to put down their bags and get ready for our first activity.Our school was made out of red old bricks and is surrounded by a humongous fence.I follow and as I past the graveyard chills went down my spine.I have heard rumors about it but try not to think about them.
"AHHHHHHHH" there is was again the screaming and wailing in the middle of the night and it doesn't sound to far away .Children were running around while some huddled in a corner.Teachers come from classroom to classroom making sure that the students were all right.After the screaming had stopped we were told to get to the hall with our stuff.When we reached there we then realized that we weren't the only people with our pajamas on.The teachers were calling out the roll two by two. "Tom and Luke, she said". Again she replied but there weren't any answers.We were told that we had to sleep in the hall and we were separated. Davey was called by Mr Fourie and then I thought that maybe he was going to be blamed for how he acts as a bully. Davey was tall and has blue eyes, he is known for the best football player in the school and also for his big scar that goes across his left eye.After a while being in the hall everyone had a shock when the door opened, but it was only Mr munro who was send to find the two missing people. He came in wide eyed and I just heard when he whispered in Mr Fouries ear "DEAD".
It was so stuffy inside the hall that I just had to get out to get some fresh air. As I walked out I caught a glimpse of something moving in the corner of my eye beside the grave and I turned to have a good view. A man with a yellow coat was walking as if he was going to faint beside the grave. As I walked towards him a hand went over my shoulder and as I turned a face was looking at me." Jenny, I whispered under my breath". She was a school drama student and is known for joining a lot of things including sports at school. Jenny is really smart, she has a ponytail that goes down to her shoulders, blue eyes and is shorter than me."What do you think you're doing, germ weasly she asked".A minute later we were walking to the grave. "Owww, I said remembering the pain from the fence we just crossed". The man just dropped down whimpering and muttering. "Germ watch out!, I heard jenny scream"I turned around only to see a glass bottle swinging over to my face and I ducked just in time. The man who stood there was now shouting "RUN" but it was too late, as I turned around Jenny was lying down restlessly with blood all over her body.What am I going to do now??????
It was so stuffy inside the hall that I just had to get out to get some fresh air. As I walked out I caught a glimpse of something moving in the corner of my eye beside the grave and I turned to have a good view. A man with a yellow coat was walking as if he was going to faint beside the grave. As I walked towards him a hand went over my shoulder and as I turned a face was looking at me." Jenny, I whispered under my breath". She was a school drama student and is known for joining a lot of things including sports at school. Jenny is really smart, she has a ponytail that goes down to her shoulders, blue eyes and is shorter than me."What do you think you're doing, germ weasly she asked".A minute later we were walking to the grave. "Owww, I said remembering the pain from the fence we just crossed". The man just dropped down whimpering and muttering. "Germ watch out!, I heard jenny scream"I turned around only to see a glass bottle swinging over to my face and I ducked just in time. The man who stood there was now shouting "RUN" but it was too late, as I turned around Jenny was lying down restlessly with blood all over her body.What am I going to do now??????
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Past midnight at school- Narrative writing
At Reremoana School, situated in Wattle Downs, Auckland, the year 7 and 8 students are gathered outside in the hot summers night on the dry, grey grass ready to spend the night at school. The younger students are not allowed to stay overnight for the fact that Reremoana School was built on a graveyard. We all know what that means. Get prepared for a spooky, dark night at school.
Davey , the school bully, shows no fear. He stands tall, hair covering his cheek like it always is. Davey turned into a bully because back when he was seven, Jenny and The Germ, two of the most smart and nerdy people in school presented a science experiment to the class. Davey was to fascinated with this steaming, bright red light that he thought it would be awesome if he stood in front of it. Of course it wasn't. Davey ended up with a large burn down the left side of his face, now a scar, also a bunch of classmates laughing and mocking him because of this ugly thing on his face. He didn't even get a girl telling him how brave he was. He blamed the whole incident on Jenny and The Germ. Ever since he has been planning revenge on them.
Without further of due Mr Fourie arrived at school and opened the doors to the hall. "Let's start the party!" He said "I've got all these fun activities planned like scrabble, charades, snakes and ladders even quiz cards!" Everyone let out an exaggerated yell of enthusiasm. Students split off in to their 'gangs' leaving Mr Fourie with stacks of games in his arms.
It was starting to get late, dark, spooky. The chitter chatter and gossip of girls faded away, loud yawns filled the room. Before Mr Fourie turned of the lights out he took the roll "Jenny Owens?" He called, there was no answer. " Must be in the toilet." He continued. "Germima Phillips?" Also no answer. "Probably in the toilet as well." The last name on the list "Davey Jones?" Davey never answers to the role, he thinks he is 'too cool,' so Mr Fourie suspected that he was present. They all waited for The Germ and Jenny to come out of the toilet. It was quiet, maybe too quiet. "Ooooooohhhhhhhhhh." The room turned cold, everyone looked around. They saw it. A ghost. It had a long, white beard, faded blue eyes and was floating around the room chanting in a low whisper, "They're not here. Look in the toilets young ones. They're not here. Look at the park. Look young ones."
It was after midnight, the ghost was still lingering around like a fart, still chanting the same words. Mr Fourie found that Davey actually wasn't here in the room neither was Jenny and The Germ. He was worried sick. So much he hardly had and fingernails left. Suddenly there was a loud shriek from quite far away. That was when Mr Fourie got the courage to listen to the ghost. The students sat trembling with the sight of this yellow teethed ghost. Mr Fourie rang the Principal, she wasn't happy at all but she came anyway to supervise the students. They have planned this for ages and they cant let this opportunity go away. Within a blink of they eye Mr Fourie was off, racing to the park.
He arrived at the park to see Jenny and The Germ... DEAD! Next to them sat Davey, smiling down on the stained red bodies. In his right hand he strongly held a stick, blood dripping down from the tip. Mr Fourie took no time and unbuckled his seatbelt, sprinted towards Davey and ripped the stick from his hand. " Davey Jones, I can't believe you!" Mr Fourie took his phone from his pocket and dialed 111. The next minute, loud sirens sounded, brightly coloured lights zooming towards the park. Two Bulky Policemen rushed out from the car followed by two paramedics. The Policemen handcuffed Davey. The Paramedics lifted the bodies in disgust and put them on beds with a blanket covering them. Mr Fourie made his way back to the hall. All of the children were safe. Davey was taken to the cells with angry parents yelling at him. Mr Fourie went to Davey's court appearance. Davey said "I will find when I get back out of this. You cant run neither can you hide. I will do whatever it takes to get you."
Davey , the school bully, shows no fear. He stands tall, hair covering his cheek like it always is. Davey turned into a bully because back when he was seven, Jenny and The Germ, two of the most smart and nerdy people in school presented a science experiment to the class. Davey was to fascinated with this steaming, bright red light that he thought it would be awesome if he stood in front of it. Of course it wasn't. Davey ended up with a large burn down the left side of his face, now a scar, also a bunch of classmates laughing and mocking him because of this ugly thing on his face. He didn't even get a girl telling him how brave he was. He blamed the whole incident on Jenny and The Germ. Ever since he has been planning revenge on them.
Without further of due Mr Fourie arrived at school and opened the doors to the hall. "Let's start the party!" He said "I've got all these fun activities planned like scrabble, charades, snakes and ladders even quiz cards!" Everyone let out an exaggerated yell of enthusiasm. Students split off in to their 'gangs' leaving Mr Fourie with stacks of games in his arms.
It was starting to get late, dark, spooky. The chitter chatter and gossip of girls faded away, loud yawns filled the room. Before Mr Fourie turned of the lights out he took the roll "Jenny Owens?" He called, there was no answer. " Must be in the toilet." He continued. "Germima Phillips?" Also no answer. "Probably in the toilet as well." The last name on the list "Davey Jones?" Davey never answers to the role, he thinks he is 'too cool,' so Mr Fourie suspected that he was present. They all waited for The Germ and Jenny to come out of the toilet. It was quiet, maybe too quiet. "Ooooooohhhhhhhhhh." The room turned cold, everyone looked around. They saw it. A ghost. It had a long, white beard, faded blue eyes and was floating around the room chanting in a low whisper, "They're not here. Look in the toilets young ones. They're not here. Look at the park. Look young ones."
It was after midnight, the ghost was still lingering around like a fart, still chanting the same words. Mr Fourie found that Davey actually wasn't here in the room neither was Jenny and The Germ. He was worried sick. So much he hardly had and fingernails left. Suddenly there was a loud shriek from quite far away. That was when Mr Fourie got the courage to listen to the ghost. The students sat trembling with the sight of this yellow teethed ghost. Mr Fourie rang the Principal, she wasn't happy at all but she came anyway to supervise the students. They have planned this for ages and they cant let this opportunity go away. Within a blink of they eye Mr Fourie was off, racing to the park.
He arrived at the park to see Jenny and The Germ... DEAD! Next to them sat Davey, smiling down on the stained red bodies. In his right hand he strongly held a stick, blood dripping down from the tip. Mr Fourie took no time and unbuckled his seatbelt, sprinted towards Davey and ripped the stick from his hand. " Davey Jones, I can't believe you!" Mr Fourie took his phone from his pocket and dialed 111. The next minute, loud sirens sounded, brightly coloured lights zooming towards the park. Two Bulky Policemen rushed out from the car followed by two paramedics. The Policemen handcuffed Davey. The Paramedics lifted the bodies in disgust and put them on beds with a blanket covering them. Mr Fourie made his way back to the hall. All of the children were safe. Davey was taken to the cells with angry parents yelling at him. Mr Fourie went to Davey's court appearance. Davey said "I will find when I get back out of this. You cant run neither can you hide. I will do whatever it takes to get you."
Past Midnight
On a stormy night, lighting bolted on the surface of the frosted hall. The wind thrusted against the cracked window's forcing the curtain's to rustle silently. The children in Reremoana's hall could hear sound's that sounded like scream's that chilled you to the spine. In the hall there was a gripping smell coming beneath the doorway's smelling like blood.
That night two student's went missing and haven't returned after they went to the toilet's. They have been missing for two hour's and since then six other's have vanished.
A boy named Davie laughed at all the other students and he was enjoying scaring them. He was mean, tough and tall. He had blue eye's and had a scar stretched across his forehead. The school considered him as the school bully. (That's why he's so mean to people.)
As Davie scared the other's the light's began to flicker and then it just went blank. AHHHHHHHHH! As the light's turned on, all of the teacher's had died. There they were, dangling from the ceiling hanging by wire's ripped out of the light box tightly rapped around their neck. All the student's started crying and Davie's smile vanished. A little girl named Jenny walked up to Davie and said "not so funny now isn't it". She giggled and skipped away.
Jenny is a six year old girl witch alway's carried a doll named germ with red eye's and gazed upon each person who walked passed. She had brown hair and blue eye's. She love's to win and is very strange in her own way.
Then again the light's began to flicker and then it just went blank. As the light's turned on all the students were dead lying on the ground smothered in blood. Now Davie was standing across the hall opposite Jenny holding the germ with his eye's gazing upon Davie. Davie started crying when he saw jenny smiling. Then the light's began to flicker and then it just went blank. Suddenly he herd let's be friend's for ever. As the light's turned on both bodies lying on the ground.
In the morning the police came in to investigate and they found germ sitting on the ground holding a knife in it's hand's. The police picked him up and brought him home that night and gave his daughter to take to her school sleep over. That night he said let's be friend's for ever.
That night two student's went missing and haven't returned after they went to the toilet's. They have been missing for two hour's and since then six other's have vanished.
A boy named Davie laughed at all the other students and he was enjoying scaring them. He was mean, tough and tall. He had blue eye's and had a scar stretched across his forehead. The school considered him as the school bully. (That's why he's so mean to people.)
As Davie scared the other's the light's began to flicker and then it just went blank. AHHHHHHHHH! As the light's turned on, all of the teacher's had died. There they were, dangling from the ceiling hanging by wire's ripped out of the light box tightly rapped around their neck. All the student's started crying and Davie's smile vanished. A little girl named Jenny walked up to Davie and said "not so funny now isn't it". She giggled and skipped away.
Jenny is a six year old girl witch alway's carried a doll named germ with red eye's and gazed upon each person who walked passed. She had brown hair and blue eye's. She love's to win and is very strange in her own way.
Then again the light's began to flicker and then it just went blank. As the light's turned on all the students were dead lying on the ground smothered in blood. Now Davie was standing across the hall opposite Jenny holding the germ with his eye's gazing upon Davie. Davie started crying when he saw jenny smiling. Then the light's began to flicker and then it just went blank. Suddenly he herd let's be friend's for ever. As the light's turned on both bodies lying on the ground.
In the morning the police came in to investigate and they found germ sitting on the ground holding a knife in it's hand's. The police picked him up and brought him home that night and gave his daughter to take to her school sleep over. That night he said let's be friend's for ever.
Tuesday 2 April 2013
Past midnight at school- narrative writing
It was summer of 2013.Reremoana school year 7/8 students were having a sleepover.It was dry,grey and there were heaps of spider webs. I walked though the school gates I felt something grab my foot I didn't know what it was so I kept on making my way to the rugby field.
My 2 best friends Jenny and Germ were all ready there waiting for me. I saw the school bully Davey. Davey is tall,strong and tough he has blone hair,blue eyes and the most scariest thing about Davey is that he has a big scar going through his left eye to his right cheek.The reason that he is a bully is that when he was younger he got bullied so he got angus that he turned into a bully.
When they settled down into bed I realized that 2 people were missing Mr Fourie said that the school was built on a old graveyard while Mr Munro was looking for the other 2 students.Mr Munro found the 2 bodies and they were dead then Mr Munro and Mr Fourie had to call they students parents to tell them that there children were dead the parents were devastated.
Then they were making there way to the tents on the rugby field.They heard a scream so then everyone assembled in the hall, Mr Munro told us to take our stuff with us so we can go to sleep.On the way there another 2 students were missing.As I rolled over I felt something next to me as I open my eyes there was a zombie!I screamed loud and Mr Fourie ran to help me.Then Mr Fourie and Mr Munro found two bodies liying on one of the graves that you could see sticking out of the ground with blood a all around them and thought the zombie had killed them.
At 2am in the morning the workers came and turned on the machines and that made us really scared.We thought it was a Zombie then Mr Fourie counted us again and And Germ Was missing..........???????
My 2 best friends Jenny and Germ were all ready there waiting for me. I saw the school bully Davey. Davey is tall,strong and tough he has blone hair,blue eyes and the most scariest thing about Davey is that he has a big scar going through his left eye to his right cheek.The reason that he is a bully is that when he was younger he got bullied so he got angus that he turned into a bully.
When they settled down into bed I realized that 2 people were missing Mr Fourie said that the school was built on a old graveyard while Mr Munro was looking for the other 2 students.Mr Munro found the 2 bodies and they were dead then Mr Munro and Mr Fourie had to call they students parents to tell them that there children were dead the parents were devastated.
Then they were making there way to the tents on the rugby field.They heard a scream so then everyone assembled in the hall, Mr Munro told us to take our stuff with us so we can go to sleep.On the way there another 2 students were missing.As I rolled over I felt something next to me as I open my eyes there was a zombie!I screamed loud and Mr Fourie ran to help me.Then Mr Fourie and Mr Munro found two bodies liying on one of the graves that you could see sticking out of the ground with blood a all around them and thought the zombie had killed them.
At 2am in the morning the workers came and turned on the machines and that made us really scared.We thought it was a Zombie then Mr Fourie counted us again and And Germ Was missing..........???????
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