Little Red Riding Hood-Narrative-Compication

Reds mum finds out that Reds grandma is vey ill. She tells Red to give her this medicine so Red immediately says "YES" and her mum tells her to stay away from dark sky's valley and to go through cliff mountains and Red says "yes." And Red put the medicine in a compartment in her hover board and puts her time box and clips it to her jeans then kisses her um goodbye then with her hover board in her hand then leaps out of the window and clips the board to her shoes and sets off to grandmas house. Then Red forgets about mums advice and meets Mr.2476 then he asks her where she is going and Red says "to my grandmas house" then Mr.2476 asks if they should race then Red says yes but Mr.2476 knew a short cut to grandmas house.