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Tuesday 14 May 2013

Narrative writing- We fight the crime

In the year of 2013, There were two mall cops. There names were Kyle and Rhys. They loved there jobs because  they are aloud to use there firearms at any time of the day. Both of them had a good childhood. They both were smart-ish but they loved to learn without been told to. They stayed out of trouble and it payed off. They got into a good high school and passed there. Last year, they both applied for a mall cop job and they were chosen and started 10 mouths ago.

It was a normal day, 5 people arrested, 2 people tazer to the bone and Sam, yes Sam. Sam is one of those people were he would do EVERYTHING to get money. "HEY" shouts Rhys. "PUT YO' HANDS ON DA' GROUND" shouts Kyle. "Nah BRO" shouts Sam. KA BOOM!, Sam shoots Rhys in the eye. "OMG" shouts and random guy. "Oh" says Kyle. "ITS TIME FOR TAZER POWER!" shouts Kyle. Kyle try's to call to S.W.A.T team to come to the seen. He calls them and within 5 mins, they are their, at the mall. Sam try's to book it out of the mall. Somehow, he brakes into a car with his bear hands. A ton of police are racing down the freeway. A cop lays spicks to sam's tires to make them flat and it works! Sam has no way to get out of this but get out of his car and run into the bush. For a little while, he got away but help is here! The cop dogs can get him!, I think? Sam is not a fast runner. Within 5mins, The cop dogs get him. Sam is at a dead end. He does not give up yet.

Sam jumps into a river knowing that he can not swim. Trying his hardest, he floats down stream. He is coming down to the beach, were it meets up. The cops are waiting for him. Sniper ready! "Yes Sir!"

THE END
HA! you thought that it was over. How about YOU make the ending?
What side are you on?
Sams or the cops?

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