It was the last minute of school.Everyone at James Cook high school was so excited that it was the holidays, but there was just this one girl called Sam.She really like school. The reason she doesn't like the holidays is that her parents don't like her doing anything.
On Friday afternoon sam was walking home from school with her BFF Josh.Sam and Josh were walking a cross the field and saw someone following them so they ran as fast as they could but the person kept on following them home.
Later Sam walked down to the dairy.She was really scared that she was going to get kidnaped.She made it to the dairy without getting kidnaped.But as soon as sam walked out of the dairy someone kidnaped her. She new this was going to happen.
As soon as she arrived at the gangsters home the gangsters locked her up in a cage.Sam looked around it was dirty, scary, wet and cold.Sam parents were getting worried it has been 30 mins since sam had gone ,maybe she was killed or kidnaped? So Sam's parents hopped in the car and went looking for her. Sam's parents were asking people have they seen sam the people said "no". They rang the police so the cops when looking .Sam's parents went looking as well, they went down an old road and saw an old home they heard Sam's voice so they ran inside and grabbed Sam and ran to the car.Sam's parents rang the cops and the cops raced here.The gangster got put in jail for 96 years and fined 1000,000,000 dollars.
Nice writing piece !
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I dont know if James Cook High will approve of this but i do Well done Eden!
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