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Monday, 19 August 2013

Persuasive writing-Wasteland-Jansje


Wasteland

Don't you want a space for talking to your friends, eating your lunch and a space for learning? Outside of Room 11 and 14 there is a patch of waste land that nobody uses or wants. The year 7 & 8's of Reremoana school would like a place of their own to relax and do their work.

Year 7 & 8's get distracted when in a cramped space for a long time, they start getting into trouble and it  starts to affect learning. If it's hot and stuffy, the year 7 and 8's can sit there in the fresh air and finish their work in peace and quiet. 

The area by room 11 and 14 is a waste of space. In winter the area of grass turns into a big swamp that little kids run through and they get wet and dirty all day. When they get home their parents blame the school and then it will become a horror story. 

The older kids need a place of their own to hang out, to talk, finish off work and to eat morning tea and lunch. Year 7 & 8s will not get into trouble and they can finish off their work faster and you can use it for more reasons like; experiments, technology and much more.

If we make this into a place for learning, having fun and not a waste of space, we can have a great time.

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