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Monday 19 August 2013

The pirates are back!- By Shayle

                    The Pirates are back!
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On a dusky, foggy and cold night, the night of the full moon, all is quiet and calm, exempt for the sea, every full moon the sea goes mad! there is a story told every full moon about 'The Pirates'. no one knows what their names are or what they look like all they know is their flag. The pirates have been gone fro decades!, since their lost fight.

That night at 10:00pm the story was being told on the rusty harbour  of silicone beach, the huge gusting waves banging along the sharpest rocks and the cold fog getting thicker. The story goes on for hours, its so terrifying. Most people think the story is false, but lots believe. the story teller was in this war, and only has one leg, a wonky nose and a lost finger.

While telling the spine tingling, eye popping and terrifying story, they here a screeching, "Arr" and the sound of a rusty anchor sky diving from a ship, "whats that?" everyone is worried and all the story teller said is "ha ha", with a witchy laugh, you villagers are so frightened that you imagining things. The story is now still getting told, and out of the night sky , lights flickering on and off an out a peers a huge ship, with the flag of.... everyone runs into the boat club and hide under the unstable tables, wetting their pants!, the story teller is gone, suddenly out appears his brand new ship with his crew, "the war shall begin!" and so they began the horrible war.

"it cant be", Their back!. They peek through the rickety windows blanketed with spider webs, making it hard to see. Cannons are blowing, windows smashing, sea clashing and pirates shouting, will we win? will the story teller be ok? our hearts are just pumping as fast as a cheetah.

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  2. I love the story and how you described the settings. I feel sorry for the poor storyteller.
    Finau.

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