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Wednesday, 7 August 2013

Mysterious Photos -By Finau

Part 1:
It was a warm, summer holiday at the farm as Olivia climbed the trees to take photographs with the nature all around her. She tried to look for exciting things in the abandoned creek . She loves the place even though people litter in it, they throw bottles and rubbish over the fence and into the water. The place had a bad smell because of the littering but she didn't mind. The thorns scratched her on the legs and the willows started to whisper as she felt them. Without the rubbish the place would look like water and willows and rocks where Olivia hopped on when taking the photos.

Olivia climbed a willow tree and clenched her camera tight as her hazel coloured eyes searched the place, looking for something to take a shot at. She bit her lip and ran to a place, then another and another with her blondish hair bouncing by behind her. She wasn't a smart blond but also not bad at class, she not bad at sports and also not good at it. She definitely loves photography, she takes her time off after school just to look at things and take pictures of it. To Olivia photography is peace and is a time to get out all the things in her head, after the car crash that when she was little.


She saw two people go by and she closed her eyes. 'Another vision, she thought' . She closed her eyes for another couple of minutes. 1...2...3... she heard a little girl counting. She opened her eyes followed the sound. 'Ready or not here I come, continued the little voice' The whole place looked different, she was having another one of her visions. She gasped as the whole creek was tidy and clean. Everything seemed to grow, there were flower beds, beehives and more pretty things. Then she bobbed down and hid behind a tree as she saw a little girl skipping along and humming a song to herself. 'I've seen her somewhere' Olivia thought. Where...have.... I...... then the vision cut off and she was unconscious. She woke up to see that she was unconscious for about 15 minutes. She saw her camera about a meter  away from her beside a willow and she stood up to get it. She couldn't see where she was going until she stepped into a hole, squashing a rabbit and twisting her foot in horror.

1 comment:

  1. I strongly think that I can focus more in my puntuation.
    Finau:)

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