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Wednesday, 7 August 2013

So close/Mikyla

It was Millies first time  on a boat and she has been taken hostage by pirates.
The pirates are keeping Millie in a dark room and she is tied up to a chair unable to move.
Millies long blonde hair gets in the way of her face which really annoys and fustrates Millie.
Millies sky coloured eyes can only see pitch black because she doesn't know it but
She is wearing a blindfold.

Millie does everything she can think of to escape the chair she is tied to but has no luck
But then suddenly Millie hears footsteps coming her way with fear already there not knowing what the pirates are going to do with her and now this.
With sweat running down her head Millie is is as scared as anything but suddenly somone pulls her blindfold off.
When the blindfold is off a gush of light is revealed and the light reveals a young boy aged same age as Millie (16)
Both Millie and Jack say nothing for a minute and finally Jack says im " here to save you "he said.

Jack then unties the rope around Millies;
Legs
Arms
hands and
feet
and now Millie is finally able to breath properly.
Jack hands Millie a sword and they both know what they have to do and that is to fight the pirates.
As Millie and Jack walk out of the dark room they are instantly spotted by pirates then instantly they both know that the fight has begun.

Millie try's hey her Best to defend herself but know that it is pointless because she has a huge cut on her arm from a pirate.
As the fight continues Jack is doing well but Millie is struggling considering  she can only use one arm
And her arm is dropping blood everywhere.
Jack sees that Millie is struggling so he helps her out and as  time passed every pirate was dead.

Suddenly Jack says to Millie "I needed an extra pair of hands to fight the pirates and you have helped"  "me"
Jack also said "I want this ship to  myself"
Millie turns to run but it was to late jack had stabbed Millie through the chest.
Jack then repents and Says "what  have I done my love" but it was to late because Millie was dead.














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