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Wednesday 31 July 2013

Revenge

It was again a foggy morning as always. People started building back their homes after the big battle that had just took place. The castle stood still . It was made of rock, everything was made of rock in the inside and outside of the palace. On the other side the villages started throwing whatever they could find, at the castle and guards. The guards struggled controlling them. All the villages were angry at the king for excepting battles. The whole place was a mess as the free animals wandered by and leaving droppings behind for the villages to clean up. The spell workers house was splashing with different colour as he tried mixing potions together, just to break the evil witches spell. The evil witches cursed the whole place to fog everyday none stop. This happened because the king did not give them their share of goods.

That night a cry filled the entire castle, echoing in the  rooms. A child was born out of the queen that night. She wished and prayed it was a girl. The castles maid women ran in and out of the room, rushing to find what they needed. As the baby came out the queen ordered for everyone to wait outside the room except her best trusted maid (Theresa). The king then banged open the door, rushing into the room to check on the baby. The queen cried and sobbed and begged the king. As soon as the king saw the crying baby, he turned bright red with anger. He had always wanted a baby girl but no. The poor queen sobbed as the maid tried to comfort her and she knew what was going to happen, the baby was going to be killed the next morning. The baby stopped crying and went to sleep. The queen felt his gingery hair and he opened his green eyes.

Early the next day the king called for his guards to bring the baby at once. Moments later the baby was bought . The king, himself held the baby with anger and uncovered the blanket. He was angrier than ever as the baby was replaced  by a dog. That same morning the queen was bought but she grew quiet. The king than killed her himself. He was sending his knights to search all over the kingdom and outside of it.

Theresa held the baby carefully as she crossed the creaking bridge with her horse. She checked the baby once more than carried on with her journey. She knew what was right when the queen gave her the child. She was getting worried in case someone had seen and reported her.She was going to raise the prince alone with her husband and 7 year old son. Outside of the kingdom where they lived no one ruled over them so they were quiet happy.
15 years went by and the prince was growing up to be really strong. He learned a lot from his 22 year old brother, at least he thinks it's his brother. He was getting better and better with swords.
'Did you hear that the king had adopted an orphan girl? Theresa asked her husband'
'She's going to rule one day, James replied' They chatted for a little while and decided to tell Arthur the whole story of his real life. At the end Arthur had trouble taking it in as it was really hard.
Another 9 years passed by and Arthur knew all he had to slice someone in the throat. He was getting very angry and he knew what he had to do. He was going to get revenge back to the king and whoever got into his way.








1 comment:

  1. Finau, your story 'gives so much detail'. I feel for the Queen and Theresa and am glad that they had decided to save the young Arthur.

    Mrs Gregory.

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