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Wednesday, 31 July 2013

Did we forget something? / Rhys

One bright and sunny evening four friends went for a day of fun. They went to an indoor paintball arena just outside the boarder of un-dead valley. In the arena it was a dark and spooky place with paint splattered everywhere. Since it was getting dark the owner turned all the lights on appeared at the counter with his mask on. We were paying when he got a phone call and this person had a very weird and creepy voice. We could just make out what he said " as promised there will be one nailed to the wall for you".........

Since it was Sam, Blake and Jeremy's first time they were pretty freaked out about getting shot. They were all scared but Rhys wasn't. If anything he was feeling a bit to confident and devious. For him it was becoming a hobby.

Once they were finished gearing up everybody started to feel more confident in them selves and the look on Rhys' face meant that there is going to be so vengeance in the up coming battle. By the time they started the first round it was 8:00pm and Sam's mum still hadn't checked on them but we didn't mind they to play. The starting horn went off and we were ready to fight. Seconds later they all heard a door slam and the lights were turned of but they thought that the owner was just trying to scare them. Rhys looked at his ammo to check how much he had left and noticed that they were glow in the dark paintballs so he yelled " HEY CHECK IT OUT TH PAINTBALLS ARE GLOW IN DARK''
and then everybody shot the walls. They carried on with there game

Shot after shot after shot. There was a constant firing in the arena with little 3-4 second silences. In one of those silences we heard a loud groan it sounded like a zombie from black ops 2. Sam and Jeremy silently gapped it over to Rhys and Blake. We all heard slow footsteps creeping closer to Rhys and Blake. It stopped for a brief moment and then started to creep towards Sam and Jeremy. Rhys and Blake were guarding the left side and Sam and Jeremy were guarding the right side. More footsteps creped up on Sam and Jeremy until it stopped. Sam had the expression on his face that said what the heck is happening. Jeremy was so relived when the footsteps had stopped he let out a massive sigh when it all went wrong. Rhys shrugged and went back to guarding his side. They all heard a massive roar that echoed in the arena when they realised that Jeremy was gone.

Everybody was freaking out and it didn't get better for them because then these things attacked. Millions of slow foot steps moving in on the on target Sam Blake and Rhys. Waiting to see one of these beings. Waiting for something to show a bit of its body. Waiting for some one to step up and lead them so Sam and Rhys they both said "COME AT ME".
Mean while Blake is still in the corner freaking out thinking are these guys crazy they are so crazy. Coming around the corner Rhys saw a foot, then its arm then its eyes. That things eyes were blue but it wasn't there long enough to confirm because Rhys had already shot its head off. The rest of its body evaporated into dust and so the battle began. Bullet after bullet one zombie went down one at a time but they quickly learnt and adapted to Sam Blake and Rhys' defence. They came in twos, Threes even fours. They climbed walls and the obstacles. Rhys realised that he was running low on ammo. First Blake ran out then Sam and then Rhys. Luckily Rhys had bought just enough time for a plan. Rhys looked at Sam and said "well we tried we came this far and I'm not going out like this"
Sam said " What's the plan ''?
Rhys said " its the paint don't like the paint that's why they evaporate!"
Rhys wiped the wall and smeared it all over his knuckles and said '' this is my plan "
He goes up to a zombie and smacks it right in the jaw knocks his head of and looks at Sam. wiping the walls punching the zombies trying to keep there distance.

They weren't looking behind them and got a massive fright when they heard paintball gun fire. " Its the owner " Sam screams. He cleared the whole lot of zombies with his fully automatic paintball gun. Everybody was so relived because the battle was all over. The owner turned the lights on and hurried us out and locked the door. Rhys looked backed and the owner took his mask off Rhys saw a glance and saw the blue eyes..........

When Sam Rhys and Blake got home they had a feeling that they left something behind.................

Rhys remembers they left............................ Jeremy

The owner goes into the arena and as he was promised by the mysterious man on the phone a body for him nailed to the wall to fest on.                          

2 comments:

  1. Hey guys

    I spent a while on this and I would love some feed back so I can edit my next post thnx

    Rhys

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  2. Great story Rhys, very creepy, nail biting! Well done.

    Mrs Gregory.

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