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Sunday, 4 August 2013
Where Do I Go Next - By Hannah
In the valley of the late 1876 lived a young and bright girl named Alex. Alex lived in a beautiful meadow with where three brothers; Tom,Cameron and Pete. For 6 years now Alex and her brothers had been living in the peaceful meadow, away from the soldiers of the valley.
The valley held many mysterious creatures like the; flying Pegasus the one eyed ogre and many more. Alex dreamed of escaping from the manstrothisy (very bad) known as "The Valley".
Later in the day a message arrived at the front door. The letter read,
Dear Alex,
your brothers have been sent to their death,
Sorry but I don't like thieves in my shop.
The Baker
Alex didn't know what to do, her heart was pounding louder than a dumb but off went her legs pumping to save her brothers from death. As her long black hair swayed from side to side, she told herself to think of a plan .
It was too late! When she arrived she could see their heads dangling from the last thread of skin. She was all alone, so she set off away from the village and meadow.
There wasn't a day passed by Alex hadn't thought about her brothers death. How could someone do such a thing and why? Alex had been riding for days and days and days until she had come across a beautiful castle filled with jewels and wished for a fate like that.
Alex wanted a beautiful castle,Husband and Jules but wished for her brothers more.
She passed the beautiful kingdom and said
Where Do I Go Next ????
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