This is a learning blog for the year 7 and year 8 students in Room 11 at Reremoana school. The writing on this blog is written us, we are the students. We edit our writing as best we can. Please have an uderstanding of our development in writing. We are looking forward to your positive feedback of our writing. - Students of Room 11
Very descriptive piece of writing Liam, I always had a picture of the setting and characters in my head. What a selfish tour guide!!!! Along with the writing I liked how you put the colours and border in, it made it look very cool!
Very descriptive piece of writing Liam, I always had a picture of the setting and characters in my head. What a selfish tour guide!!!! Along with the writing I liked how you put the colours and border in, it made it look very cool!
ReplyDeleteGemma:)