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Sunday 16 June 2013

The rapids Part 1

It was a warm spring day in Spring Lake. 5 friends decided to go white water rafting. James the youngest decided to get the raft, Daniel decided to get the ore's. Lilly and Eden decided to get the safety gear and Dane decided to get the food. Spring Lake is a peaceful place to have things like; Picnics, swims, and a place to soak up the vitamin D. But if you beyond the sky scraping trees, and the lushes mountain sites all the adventure is hidden in plain site. Suspiciously someone was lurking in the woods.

James is a 21 year old guy living the dream (his version). Ever since he was six he always wanted to get into the Olympics, to represent his country for white water rafting, he always dreamed of his parents to be their along the way but sadly when he was 11 his parents died in a hit and run car accident while going to get him from school. Now he lives in a pent house over looking a gaping city bustling with life.

As all the gang hops into the little yellow raft they say say""Goodbye" to the peaceful meadows that lie just in front of the cool blue lake, and said hello to extreme waters. They slowly paddle off to go to the RAPIDS. As the group take deep breaths suddenly slipping into the raging rivers, they twist and slide and try to get the boat straight but every time they do it slips away. As the mysterious figure pulls into the raging river the group don't notice as the shady figure as they zoom past and in a flash he's after them. As the boat twists and turns Daniel catches a glimpse of their pursuer as he notices he catching up to them. He tells everyone to paddle faster and faster they go but as Daniel looks back he see's nothing but then a BANG knocks everyone off their feet and into calm waters. But it's only when Dane looks up he see's a man dressed in black from head to toe they all let out a giant scream.......................................................................

1 comment:

  1. Nicholas,

    Interesting starter, I can not wait for part 2?

    Mum.

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