Wasted space - Mathew (Persuasive Writing)

Would you like to take your delicious lunch outside to a place where little children play with mud and make the place filthy having you lose your appetite? Nobody certainly wants that but what the year 7 & 8's (rooms 11 & 14) of the Kereru team need is new concrete tables at the unused are outside the 4 Kereru team classes. There are many opportunities with concrete tables for example; it can be turned into board games, children can enjoy their learning outside, it'll give children the opportunity just to chill out and socialize and also children can use the space for technology programs.

The concrete tables give a great option for children to learn outside instead of feeling as they are trapped at their desk. If we had concrete tables outside in the wasted area children would rather enjoy learning whilst getting fresh air and also would be able to focus more. It'll give children more space to learn as they won't have to always be cramped up in tiny spaces making it better for children. It's nice to peacefully do your work in a calm area (concrete tables) and it will mean children will be more focused then will work better.

Whenever children from the older classes come to eat at the area where little kids normally play around, it usually isn't that pleasant as it is dirty, muddy and overall just unhygenic. However if we had concrete tables in the area, children would enjoy eating in a clean area rather than being forced to eat in an area where year 7 & 8's do not like because little children throw rubbish, play in the mud and run around like headless chickens.

In conclusion to my argument I highly recommend we should do something about all this wasted space outside the kereru team classes. It will be better for children's learning, focus and socializing. It will also make happy children!