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Sunday 24 March 2013

Writing a complication-little red riding hood

"Red , Red I'm running to the super market for some food for grandma , she is starving and if she doesn't eat we'll have to pay for another funeral". "Okay mum"said Red. All red did at home was play minecraft , it was her favourite thing to do she was obsessed with it. " Mum , mum you back" said Red ." hear Red take this to your grandma with the butler and be back quick.  

As  the butler drove down the country road through hicury forest they start to slow down , " Red we seem to be out of gas" said the butler. Theres a spear tub of it in the back mum keeps it there just in case we do run out. So they set of again through the country roads.

"Butler theres a car following us I think he's try to tell us something" said Red . As the man approached
he asked"HEY"! The angry old man yelled "wanna race bro?" I'll give you a couple of dollars if you win""okay sir your on"said the butler. So they set off on the race through the windy road to grandmas house. But the man knew a cheat cut to get there first, he really want to win, he was desprite.

When they were deep into the race they discovered that the man was already at Red's grandma's house , so they decided to get there super fast. When Red and the butler finally go to her grandmas house they ran in to find the old man but all they could see was Reds grandma laying in bed starving."Why is your mouth so big"said Red " so I can eat you DOOF! the man jumped out and attacked them.

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