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Monday, 8 April 2013

ONCE IN A PICTURE

One misty night at reremoana school in the summer of 2013. It was unusually quiet that There were no birds chirping, no wind blowing. The only sound that we could hear was the taps dripping.

Davey was a tall strong 13 year old. He is the toughest kid in the school and no one gets in his way. He has blonde hair and one blue eye. On his other eye he has a big scare that covers his eye. He is scared for life.

That night all year 7/8 students were camping in the hall. Two students Jenny and Davey were researching the schools history and found out that Reremoana school was built on an old grave yard that was built in the 18th century. At that moment they were told to finish up with what they were doing they noticed a figure in the picture. It was to hard to make out the face . They were told to turn it off straight away by they're principle or it would be taken off them. About 5 minutes later there was a scream and a splash. Everyone woke up. We were counted and we found out that principle brown was missing. Mr Blake went to investigate and found april and ben cut open on the floor.

At twelve at night we heard a dripping sound and then the lights flickered the fire alarm went one and off and then everybody wakes up. We hear a scream and again we count how many people are here. Jenny is missing.

We were about to leave the school when the doors wouldn't open. The lights turned off and on and principle Brown was there but he wasn't the same his eyes were red and he had A KNIFE IN HIS HAND. They flickered on and off rapidly. You could see the principle moving closer and closer untill we heard a knife slice through some ones body but who's??? The lights came back on and Davey  holding the principles head in his hand.

The next day the school was secure and the bodies were returned to their families except Jenny she was not found.........

2 comments:

  1. Wow, is there a Part 2 Rhys? I would love to know what happened to 'Jenny'.

    Mrs Gregory.

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  2. WOW! Cool writing Rhys. Love the title too.

    Hannah & Gemma.

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