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Tuesday, 9 April 2013
Her Little Red Hood
Once apon a time in a magical land there lived a smart and inelegant
young girl.
She had dark long curly hair that swayed as she galloped threw the meadow.
Her light blue eyes sparkled like diamonds , her name was Little Red
One day granny did not feel well so Little Reds mother called her from
the meadow where Little Red was picking flowers.
As Little Red reached the the house her mother
was holding a basket covered by a green and blue tea towel.
As Little red was walking threw the meadow
and into the forest she saw Mr Wolf.
Mr Wolf was a screed and nice fox but after the last accident with granny
he turned from hungry to good. And Little Red and Mr Wolf became friends
anyway.
He saw Little red heading towards Grannies house and tiptoed behind her as they entered.
Granny ,Granny Little Red shouted stepping threw the broken glass
its me Little Red and Mr Wolf i have food for you.
Then there was a big bang out side ??????????????
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Great story Hannah.... Very descriptive!
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Kim Mesley