This is a learning blog for the year 7 and year 8 students in Room 11 at Reremoana school. The writing on this blog is written us, we are the students. We edit our writing as best we can. Please have an uderstanding of our development in writing. We are looking forward to your positive feedback of our writing. - Students of Room 11
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Tuesday, 16 April 2013
Reremoana School Cross Country 2013!
Congratulation to all the Room 11 athletes that participated in the anual Reremoana School Cross Country day.
A special Congratulation to all the top three finishers!
1. Gemma - 1st year 7 girls
2. Hannah 2nd year 7 girls
3. Liam 1st year 7 boys
4. Teia 2nd year 7 boys
5. David 3rd year 7 boys
6. Leslie 1st year 8 girls
7. April 2nd year 8 girls
8. Finau 3rd year 8 Girls
9. Rayaan 2nd year 8 boys.
Well done superstars!!!
Tuesday, 9 April 2013
Her Little Red Hood
Once apon a time in a magical land there lived a smart and inelegant
young girl.
She had dark long curly hair that swayed as she galloped threw the meadow.
Her light blue eyes sparkled like diamonds , her name was Little Red
One day granny did not feel well so Little Reds mother called her from
the meadow where Little Red was picking flowers.
As Little Red reached the the house her mother
was holding a basket covered by a green and blue tea towel.
As Little red was walking threw the meadow
and into the forest she saw Mr Wolf.
Mr Wolf was a screed and nice fox but after the last accident with granny
he turned from hungry to good. And Little Red and Mr Wolf became friends
anyway.
He saw Little red heading towards Grannies house and tiptoed behind her as they entered.
Granny ,Granny Little Red shouted stepping threw the broken glass
its me Little Red and Mr Wolf i have food for you.
Then there was a big bang out side ??????????????
Little Red Riding Hood-Narrative-Resolution
She pushed her time box then through her eyes she saw what happened. Then she lands back on the floor then rushes into grandmas house then about a minute Mr.2476 came though the door and in surprise he saw Red standing next to her grandma. In a flash Reds R.E.D coat slid down her arm then formed into a MK47 then she went balitza all over the prison jumper then in a quick moment he was dead...
Little Red Riding Hood-Narrative-Climax
Red glides though the trees dodging everything that flies at her while she was doing that. Mr.2476 was already at Reds grandmas door then barges though the door to see Reds grandma lying down in bed then Mr.2476 got out a knife and started to stab the life out of Reds grandma. Red comes up to her grandmas door to see it had come of its hinges to find Reds grandma on the floor with blood all over the floor and Mr.2476 stading next to her.
Red Riding Hood !
I am picking up little flowers far away from our cottage and near the woods. My red dress and cape has got stains on them from climbing the trees. I was told too many times not to go there far away and I was never told why. I loved this part because of how it grows wild flowers and long grass that tickles my feet as I walk. I breathed softly as the air smelled like honey. This part is the only part that grows big wild shady trees and a little pond. I listened as the bees buzzed around from flower to flower.
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