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Sunday, 24 March 2013
Writing a complication-Little red riding hood
One stormy day we heard bad news about one of our family member. It was gran. She had been sick for the past 2 weeks and its gotten even worse. Reds mum gave red some sweets and treats to give to gran. Once red stepped one foot out the door she had realize that it was raining so she ran back in side and got a raincoat that happen to be red. As she was walking down the dark, cold forest she heard a noise come from the bushes so she stopped and looked around her to see if there was anyone around her but there wasn't so she kept on walking but suddenly she heard a brunch been stood on but so she ran as fast as she could she seen something jump right in front of her it was the big bad wolf wonting something but then she said no time to sit and chat I have to get to gran to deliver some sweets and treats. So off she went as soon as she got there she saw gran in her bed I say "Hi gran" why are your eyes so big? So I can hear you better gran says. Why is your nose so big? So I can smell that delicious food you got in that basket of yours says gran and why is your mouth so big? Red say so that I can eat you gran says little red.
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Nice writing Leslie!
ReplyDeleteGreat story Leslie.
ReplyDeleteMrs Gregory.
Nice story !
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