This is a learning blog for the year 7 and year 8 students in Room 11 at Reremoana school. The writing on this blog is written us, we are the students. We edit our writing as best we can. Please have an uderstanding of our development in writing. We are looking forward to your positive feedback of our writing. - Students of Room 11
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Wednesday, 27 March 2013
Sunday, 24 March 2013
Writing a complication-little red riding hood
"Red , Red I'm running to the super market for some food for grandma , she is starving and if she doesn't eat we'll have to pay for another funeral". "Okay mum"said Red. All red did at home was play minecraft , it was her favourite thing to do she was obsessed with it. " Mum , mum you back" said Red ." hear Red take this to your grandma with the butler and be back quick.
As the butler drove down the country road through hicury forest they start to slow down , " Red we seem to be out of gas" said the butler. Theres a spear tub of it in the back mum keeps it there just in case we do run out. So they set of again through the country roads.
"Butler theres a car following us I think he's try to tell us something" said Red . As the man approached
he asked"HEY"! The angry old man yelled "wanna race bro?" I'll give you a couple of dollars if you win""okay sir your on"said the butler. So they set off on the race through the windy road to grandmas house. But the man knew a cheat cut to get there first, he really want to win, he was desprite.
When they were deep into the race they discovered that the man was already at Red's grandma's house , so they decided to get there super fast. When Red and the butler finally go to her grandmas house they ran in to find the old man but all they could see was Reds grandma laying in bed starving."Why is your mouth so big"said Red " so I can eat you DOOF! the man jumped out and attacked them.
As the butler drove down the country road through hicury forest they start to slow down , " Red we seem to be out of gas" said the butler. Theres a spear tub of it in the back mum keeps it there just in case we do run out. So they set of again through the country roads.
"Butler theres a car following us I think he's try to tell us something" said Red . As the man approached
he asked"HEY"! The angry old man yelled "wanna race bro?" I'll give you a couple of dollars if you win""okay sir your on"said the butler. So they set off on the race through the windy road to grandmas house. But the man knew a cheat cut to get there first, he really want to win, he was desprite.
When they were deep into the race they discovered that the man was already at Red's grandma's house , so they decided to get there super fast. When Red and the butler finally go to her grandmas house they ran in to find the old man but all they could see was Reds grandma laying in bed starving."Why is your mouth so big"said Red " so I can eat you DOOF! the man jumped out and attacked them.
Resolution - Little Red Riding Hood
The Big Bad Wolf doesn't realize that if he falls in and tries to swim back up their won't be a chance because he is filled up with stones. The Big Bad Wolf has accidentally fell in and looks like his life ends here.Now that Little Red Riding hood and her grandma are safe they can live happily ever after.
Writing a complication-Little red riding hood
One stormy day we heard bad news about one of our family member. It was gran. She had been sick for the past 2 weeks and its gotten even worse. Reds mum gave red some sweets and treats to give to gran. Once red stepped one foot out the door she had realize that it was raining so she ran back in side and got a raincoat that happen to be red. As she was walking down the dark, cold forest she heard a noise come from the bushes so she stopped and looked around her to see if there was anyone around her but there wasn't so she kept on walking but suddenly she heard a brunch been stood on but so she ran as fast as she could she seen something jump right in front of her it was the big bad wolf wonting something but then she said no time to sit and chat I have to get to gran to deliver some sweets and treats. So off she went as soon as she got there she saw gran in her bed I say "Hi gran" why are your eyes so big? So I can hear you better gran says. Why is your nose so big? So I can smell that delicious food you got in that basket of yours says gran and why is your mouth so big? Red say so that I can eat you gran says little red.
Writing-climax-little red riding hood
Little Bot hovered through the deep dark ally way until she saw a peculiar shadow in front of her and guess who it was, it was the Robot Goat! She relied on her instincts and pepper-sprayed him,he apologized for scaring her and wanted to settle this with a race. But the bad thing was he had a 422637X3,000,000 TRIPLE SUPREME PLUS EXTREME LASER ADDITION HOVER BOARD. Then in a flash the Robot Goat was off. Little Bot finally made it to her Grandma's house, then she realized that was not her Grandma in bed ,but the Robot Goat !!! AHH !!! Screamed Little Bot,she sprinted out of the house through the ally way while the ferocious Robot Goat right behind her. She managed to get out only to see a mad Porcupine with a sharks fin, a lizards tail, horses hooves and it breathes Purple acid and farts icicles and carries a 60-pond bazooka. Sparky !!! yelled Little Bot, that was her pet. When the Robot Goat skidded to a stop in front of Sparky, as fast as you can say pickles on pickle farm, the bazooka went bang!
Writing-complication-Little Red Riding Hood
Little Red Riding Bot's Mum, Martha heard terrible news, Grandmother was very ill and she was not getting any better. Martha made some hologram Strawberries for Grandma and told Little Bot to deliver them. Whatever you do stay away from the Robot Goat. Said Martha trembling. Little Bot hopped on her hover board 422637X3,000,000 TRIPLE SUPREME PLUS LASER ADDITION .And got ready to hover!
Thursday, 21 March 2013
Writing-Orientation Character Discription-Little Red Riding Hood-Nicholas
Little Red Riding Hood is a laid back 14 year old with a passion for time travel. She loves to explore the vast unknown of the galaxy, and never goes anywhere with out her X class M7 hover board and her R.E.D hood with them she can do anything.She loves: traveling, going to the movies, doing nothing and of course time traveling. But she hates: everything posh, a broken hover board, and doing chores.But she has a soft spot for her grandma, who lives on the out skirts of the city in a little village far away from the bustling metropolis located in the middle of the city. Red lives in a pent house on top of the apartment hotel because her mum and dad are multi millionaires and they work a lot so Red is used to being home alone and she is fine with that.
Writing - orientation. Little red riding hood
Lil Red is a very loud person that is always up to do anything. She is a dare devil girl that a loves to skate around. She has urban street look that is always red and black. She wears a red hoodie, black skinny jeans and red tinted glass'. She really doesn't like her neighbors because they alway throw parties that last in till the next day that and they never invite her.
Tuesday, 19 March 2013
Lucy on holiday in Aus!
Lucy is on holiday in Australia and have made her own blog.
Have a look what she is up to and feel free to post comments.
Lucy on Holiday
Have a look what she is up to and feel free to post comments.
Lucy on Holiday
Monday, 18 March 2013
Thursday, 14 March 2013
More helpful maths websites!
Have a look at this amasing website. It gives you basic facts and place value practise questions and also timed tests. Every time you click on the pratise tasks or the test it will give you a different set of numbers. Give it a go and then post a comment about the website. Only use the Basic Facts link.
Basic Facts!
Basic Facts!
Helpful Maths Websites!
Have a look at this website. It will help you develop knowledge in Algebra, Statistics, Geometry and Measurement. You choose the maths strand and the year level. See how many challenges you can complete. When you are done, please leave a comment and tell us how useful this website is for you.
Algebra, Geometry, Measurment and Statistics.
Algebra, Geometry, Measurment and Statistics.
Wednesday, 13 March 2013
Mathletics Celebration!
Congratulations Jaylen!!
Working hard on Mathletics can help you learn your basic facts and also improve your general number knowledge. Jaylen is doing just that.
See if you can come into the top 3 in New Zealand at anytime and take a snapshot to be published on the class blog.
Working hard on Mathletics can help you learn your basic facts and also improve your general number knowledge. Jaylen is doing just that.
See if you can come into the top 3 in New Zealand at anytime and take a snapshot to be published on the class blog.
Sunday, 10 March 2013
Report writing - Janelle Wilson
The Historic Win
By Janelle Wilson
The 1st of March the most exciting highlight for the seniors, The Kereru swim day, the most incredible event for the seniors of Reremoana. Both Room 11 and Room 14 competed for the glory to become the light side or to become or stay the Dark side.
To get to the pools at Sykes road students travelled by car with one of the parents of the swimming students. Once we arrived at Sykes Road pools we waited by the entrance then pushed through the gates once we were told to get a move on and get dressed.
The first event was 25 meter freestyle, first up was the year 7 girls we had two lanes that we raced in which meant 2-3 girls racing at a time as fast as we could to get the 1st position. Mr Fourie lined us up in our different capabilities, 1st extremely good, 2nd good, 3rd okay, 4th need help. Once the first race begun that is when the noise rose until it felt like your eardrums were going to burst into a million separate pieces .
The second event was 25m freestyle year 7 boys and the same thing happened the sensation of noise made your eardrums feel like they were going to burst into one million different pieces. It was horrible but, somehow I enjoyed it. Then it was the year eights turn everyone screamed well the year sevens did anyway.
The swim day was one of the best days in the year so far. Everyone should agree and that’s FINAL!! (otherwise some people who are very sensitive may scream until their cracks and then they have no voice left) The final score was 105-110 and guess who won the best class in the school....Room 11!!!! We are the best class and no other person could say that better than I can!!
Thursday, 7 March 2013
Orienteering with Room6!
On Wednesday we had the opportunity to show off our orienteering skills by teaching the younger students in Room 6 how to orientate the map.
It feels great to help someone else. Hopefulle they will be able to use a map now to navigate themselves around our school.
It feels great to help someone else. Hopefulle they will be able to use a map now to navigate themselves around our school.
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